Shining Flare Dragons (Updated)

[chuerta6]

[spoiler=Monsters]

[spoiler=Legendary Dragon]

lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your Deck or hand by sending 3 Level 8 or higher Dragon-Type monsters from your Deck to your Graveyard. After this card was Summoned. this card cannot attack for 3 of your opponent's turns. If this card attacks, destroy this card and take damage equal to the amount of Dragon-Type monsters you control x1000.

 

 

[spoiler=Saideto]

lore:When this card is Summoned, add 1 "Shining Flare Dragon" card from your deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

 

[spoiler=Kimo]

lore:This card cannot be Summoned unless there are 2 "Shining Flare Dragon" cards on your field. When this card is sent from your Deck to the Graveyard, Special Summon it.

 

 

[spoiler=Mage of Lair]

lore:This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster when it is in your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.

 

 

[spoiler=Kull]

lore:When this card is Summoned, you can send 1 Dragon-type Tuner monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 face-up "Shining Flare Dragon" monster to Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard.

 

 

[spoiler=Demi]

lore:When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Spells]

[spoiler=Shining Hope]

lore:Discard 1 "Shining Flare Dragon" card. Draw 2 cards, then send 1 "Shining Flare Dragon" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard.

 

 

[spoiler=Shining Flare Dragon Call]

lore:Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 face-up Dragon-Type Tuner monster to Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Deck. During each of your End Phases, send 2 "Shining Flare Dragon" monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Traps]

[spoiler=Flare Up!]

lore:Activate only when your opponent activates a Trap Card, or Effect Monster's effect, if you control a face-up 'Shining Flare Dragon' card. Negate the activation and destroy that card.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Syncro Monsters]

[spoiler=Pyrox]

1 Dragon-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Shining Flare Dragon' monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, send up to 4 "Shining Flare Dragon" monster(s) from your Deck to the Graveyard.When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon up to 4 "Shining Flare Dragon" monster(s) from your Graveyard.

 

 

 

 

NEW CARD

lore:1 Tuner Spellcaster-Type + 1 or more non-Tuner "Shining Flare Dragon" monsters

Face-up Dragon-Type monsters are unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. If a player controls at least 2 "Shining Flare" monsters the controller(s) of the monsters can draw 1 extra card, in addition to conducting his/her normal draw, during the Draw Phase.

 

some images were from JazinKay, Deviant Art and google search

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Flame_Manipulator

All edited by me and Gimp 2.68

[chuerta6]

Bump please comment

[SgtExell]

Im not the best at OCG myself as I tend to use the old system however you've got it all wrong. Sorry pal.

The first card is ok. Its not brilliant. OCG is poor. Image could be better.

2nd card is better. Not a bad image. Not sure how good the effect is though. OCG is poor.

3rd card is better again. I like the image because I love machines and it looks sort of machiney :). Effect is ok. OCG not quite there.

4th card. Seen the image a lot. Get a different one. Effect isnt that amazing.

5th card. OCG is almost there. Pic is nice and original. Effect seems ok.

 

All the card's effects are balance so you've donw well there.

 

It might sound bad but with improvements I think you're nearly there. Tell me if you want some help with OCG. I'm not the best but I can help if you want. When you make improvements i'll give you my rating.

[chuerta6]

thanks for the coments i will change after a few more comments and yes please help me correct my OCG

[chuerta6]

updated

[chuerta6]

Fixed OCG(or at least i think)

 

been looking at ocg threads now ima give it a shot to fix my own mistakes

 

card 1: When this card is Summoned, add 1 "Shining Flare Dragon" card from your deck and/or Graveyard to your hand.

 

card 2:This card cannot be Summoned unless there are 2 "Shining Flare Dragon" cards on your field. When this card is sent from your Deck to the Graveyard, Special Summon it.

 

card 3:This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster when it is in your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.

 

card 4:When this card is Summoned, you can send 1 Dragon-type Tuner monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 face-up "Shining Flare Dragon" monster to Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard.

 

card 5:When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position.

 

card 6:Discard 1 "Shining Flare Dragon" card. Draw 2 cards, then send 1 "Shining Flare Dragon" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard.

 

card 7:Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 face-up Dragon-Type Tuner monster to Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Deck. During each of your End Phases, send 2 "Shining Flare Dragon" monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard.

 

card 8:Activate only when your opponent activates a Trap Card, or Effect Monster's effect, if you control a face-up 'Shining Flare Dragon' card. Negate the activation and destroy that card.

 

card 9:1 Dragon-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Shining Flare Dragon' monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, send up to 4 "Shining Flare Dragon" monster(s) from your Deck to the Graveyard.When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon up to 4 "Shining Flare Dragon" monster(s) from your Graveyard.

[chuerta6]

Bump

[legacy117]

Overall Rank: C Rank

 

Reason being:

The cards aren't bad and there is a good concept behind this set. I see alot of potential and to improve, just follow the OCG already given. Also some cards are over-powered; fix that. Overall, this is a good set with minor errors.

[NeosWiseman]

First, I dont see the first card X_X

Second, OCG:

1/ X

2/ no errors spotted

3/ again no errors

4/ Kull - capitalize: Special Summon, Normal Summon, Graveyard, Dragon-Type, Tuner

5/ Demi - Dragon-Type

6/ Shining Hope - Send 1 "Shining Flare Dragon" from your Deck

7/ Dragon Call - again capitalization of Deck, Dragon-Type, Tuner, Monster Cards, Special Summon

8/ Flare Up - I don't see any flaws here, but maybe you should add an before Effect Monster's effect

9/ Pyrox - just now I noticed you corrected the OCG X_X; ok than for this one it is OK

 

There are some errors that remain though, so look them over again

Now, overall, your cards are awesome

And I'm not saying it only because I have affinity to Dragons :-P

Good job! With the corrected OCG, I can give you the maximum 10/10

Keep up the good work! ^_^

[chuerta6]

Updated and Corrected OCG some images were changed

[Ghoulish]

nice set its original and could be quite competitive dont particularly like ths ummoning ffrom the deck as u can easily spam 3 then run skill drain, mimor ocg errors pics r ok, 9/10 nice work

[chuerta6]

thanks for the review

[chuerta6]

Bump

 

Updated new cards added

[zancrow the flame god]

good cards. 9/10

[chuerta6]

So what did you think about the cards?