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Return Of The Plague


Drakonnas

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Hey there. I have always liked Zombies, and Mill decks. So I decided to try to combine them. I tend to OP my cards, so please give any comments possible. Thanks!

 

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I would like feedback on what I can improve on...

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Well there are a few OP cards for example your plague dragon card, his first effect seems fine, but his second effect allows you to bring a 2350 atk monster from the deck or grave every turn. That is very op thats just one example, i think you just need to re look some of these card effects.

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apart from general grammar errors, there isnt really any OCG. Special Summon is capitalized, and 'death trap' could be worded better, like sakeretsu armor except you add that extra effect on the end. My only other thing would be that 'Vamp of the Plague' is slightly 'OPed (no way to kill it without punishment), and it really should be 'Vampire of the Plague'

By your score chart in your sig, I rate 8.8/10

 

P.S. (the synchros would be better as fusions. This isnt because i hate syncrhos, like in my sig, its because it would just fit more)

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