Drakonnas Posted May 3, 2010 Report Share Posted May 3, 2010 Hey there. I have always liked Zombies, and Mill decks. So I decided to try to combine them. I tend to OP my cards, so please give any comments possible. Thanks! No comments? I would like feedback on what I can improve on... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nabby-dude Posted May 5, 2010 Report Share Posted May 5, 2010 pretty good, but I have some questions Death Trap: "half of their level" what if it has an odd number of levels? Bubonic Plague Virus: "During each draw phase, the top card of their deck is discarded" is that before or after you draw? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakonnas Posted May 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2010 hmmm... good question. I'll fix the Death trap to round up, and for the bubonic plague, after they draw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakonnas Posted May 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 Why are there no comments? Are these really that bad? (just kidding) Or are they perfect? (just kidding) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwilightSoul Posted May 18, 2010 Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 Well there are a few OP cards for example your plague dragon card, his first effect seems fine, but his second effect allows you to bring a 2350 atk monster from the deck or grave every turn. That is very op thats just one example, i think you just need to re look some of these card effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salior Posted May 19, 2010 Report Share Posted May 19, 2010 apart from general grammar errors, there isnt really any OCG. Special Summon is capitalized, and 'death trap' could be worded better, like sakeretsu armor except you add that extra effect on the end. My only other thing would be that 'Vamp of the Plague' is slightly 'OPed (no way to kill it without punishment), and it really should be 'Vampire of the Plague'By your score chart in your sig, I rate 8.8/10 P.S. (the synchros would be better as fusions. This isnt because i hate syncrhos, like in my sig, its because it would just fit more) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakonnas Posted May 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 Ok. I will fix those errors. How should I fix Vampire?And for dragon, I meant to say Spreader, not knight. I will fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 Good. I run Zombies too, but "Milling" means your own deck. What your cards are are deck destruction cards. Some minor OP'ed cards and OCG errors, but overall, okay. 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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