Ninjakaras1234 Posted May 5, 2010 Report Share Posted May 5, 2010 Please read the effects and comments please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AeroSinthetic Posted May 5, 2010 Report Share Posted May 5, 2010 Alien Demon Warrior :Alien is not a type and Demon is not an archtype. Try something like Warrior. Volte the fire demon dragon :Name should be Volte the Fire Demon Dragon "When this card is in the Graveyard, you can return this card to your hand." - The effect should be something like that. Ratings Alien Demon Warrior - 7.5/10Balance - 9/10 (Non-Effect)Picture - 6/10 (Not very yugioh-ish at all) Volte the Fire Demon Dragon - 3.75/10Balance - 3/10Picture - 5/10 (Again)OCG - 3/10Effect - 4/10 It's obviously not your first card so I won't give you new member points, besides, I'm new too so I don't know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted May 5, 2010 Report Share Posted May 5, 2010 vannila should have more descripwhat he said6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted May 5, 2010 Report Share Posted May 5, 2010 Demon is not an archtype. He's putting Demon as a Subtype, not an Archtype. An Archtype goes in the name, the Subtype is, a toon, tuner, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 5, 2010 Report Share Posted May 5, 2010 alott of errors both in the names and effects, 2nd card is quite bad, change the effect and learn ocg more and decrease the atk and def 1st card :6/10 2nd card 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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