new updates! (corrected OCG)

[chuerta6]

lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your Deck or hand by sending 3 Level 8 or higher Dragon-Type monsters from your Deck to your Graveyard. After this card was Summoned. this card cannot attack for 3 of your opponent's turns. If this card attacks, destroy this card and take damage equal to the amount of Dragon-Type monsters you control x1000.

 

 

lore:When this card is Summoned, add 1 "Shining Flare Dragon" card from your deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

lore:This card cannot be Summoned unless there are 2 "Shining Flare Dragon" cards on your field. When this card is sent from your Deck to the Graveyard, Special Summon it.

[Noahmeta]

"..this card is Summoned, this card cannot attack for 3 of your ..."

 

it's a comma not a period :o

 

"If this card attacks, destroy this card and take damage equal to the amount of Dragon-Type monsters you control x1000."

 

is this only during the 3 opponent's turns? or forever? otherwise you don't really need the whole opponent's turn thing... because it has so many restrictions it's underpowered :(

 

nice holo tho :]

 

7/10

 

"When this card is Summoned, Add 1 "Shining Flare Dragon" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand."

 

i don't know whether you mean shining flare dragon monsters as in any card with shining flare dragon in their name (like this card), or a specific Shining Flare Dragon. otherwise put monster after "Shining Flare Dragon" in your OCG

9/10

[RedRaptor10]

the 1st card looks UPed cuz of 3 turns. maybe make it so it can attack the turn it is summoned? good nice original effect. :) 4/5

 

2nd card: looks pretty simple. capitlize Deck. and unless Shining Flare Dragon is the full name of a card, i'd take out the parenthases. maybe make it level 4 too? 3/5

[chuerta6]

i accidentally posted this will add more cards currently working on them