Ultar, warrior of the forest

[guy22]

i made a card, following the new ocg rules (i know the name is very cheesy):

[Cloister]

Lol, this card is not OPed at all...

 

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Pic is good, but name is just... Not fitting with the pic. Effect is simple but too powerful. And remove "Arrtibute" in the effect. Only OCG "error"; just old OCG.

 

4/10 for being aayoeyhe-n OPed.

[Master White]

1st. This card is way overly op'd as already stated. Make it an 8 star or something or add an effect. Than lower its attack by 300 points. Or you could say this, "While this card is Face-up on the field, EARTH monsters on the field can attack your opponent directly." Or you could say something like this, "While you only control EARTH monsters on your side of the field, your monsters can attack Directly." But it is your effect and I will allow you to choose and edit and etc. Also, you are an advanced member and you have an overly op'd card? Oh well, it is what you thought of it. Finally, your card's picture is good, but not good enough to be on this card, b/c this card is so op'd the picture wants to break out of it.

 

So my overall rating is 4/10. Enjoy. Have a good day and keep up the good work, I can see you are trying, and that's all that counts, right?

[guy22]

thanks (i think)

[Master White]

Yea, i was complimenting that you did good, and you did. Congratz. You need to work more on balancing the cards, than work on the effects. Continue the good work.

[guy22]

thanks, i made a couple of others that are better, war titan, hell eel and heavon griffon