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BloodBlader

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Guest BloodBlader

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This is a set is based off a book I have been Wrighting

 

 

 

[spoiler= Dimencenal Doors]145242-O4SEB0D.jpg[spoiler=monster][spoiler= BloodBlader]507749q.jpg[spoiler= lore]This card cannot be destroyed by battle.

 

Tribute this card from your side of the Field to Special Summon 1 "Blood Blader" card from your Hand or Graveyard

 

 

507749z.jpg[spoiler= lore]This card cannot be destroyed by battle.

 

 

211583.jpg[spoiler=lore]This card can only Special Summoned by sacraficing 1 "Blood Blader" card equiped with "A Reason For Rage" card. Pay hafe of your life points to send all cards in both players' hands and on the field to Graveyard. Inflict 300 points damage to opponent's Life Points for each card that is sent to the Graveyard by this effect.

211583.jpg[spoiler=lore]This card can only Special Summoned by sacraficing 1 "Blood Blader" card equiped with "A Reason For Rage" card.

still working on effect

 

 

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[spoiler=Max Gunner]507749fe.jpg211583.jpg

 

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A.Prime Newbie

A.Prime

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Some OCG errors:

this is for the 1st card----->This card...

 

now for both:

can not = cannot

Sacrafice = Tribute

summon = Summon (Normal Summon, Special Summon etc.)

graveyard = Graveyard

summoned = Summoned (Normal Summoned, Special Summoned etc.)

ATK points = ATK (the same goes for DEF)

all attributes are writing like this: FIRE Attribute, DARK Attribute etc.

 

I like the pictures...so I'll give you 6/10

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Womi Newbie

Womi

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Based off a book you wrote?

Dude, you can't even write. Especially no book.

 

Also, your OCG seems to be made up from a seven-year-old with a potato in his head.

 

Fix your spelling. I can't rate stuff like this.

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Tenneko Kazeno Newbie

Tenneko Kazeno

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Nice cards, but some appear to be missing as only four are visible. For your first card, blader of blood, it should read "Tribute this card from your side of the Field to Special Summon". The wording was changed because as was, you could sacrifice it from your hand, and the only form of summoning which effects the Graveyard is Special Summoning. Also Warior should be Warrior.

 

For Sara the Overlord, same thing, "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 "Sara" monster froom your side of the Field." I am assuming you mean this card to be like Dark Eradicating Warlock, or Red Eyes Darkness Dragon, if not, then please explain what you mean and I'll try again. Also, her effect with the FIRE monsters. You have to specify, like all FIRE monsters in the Graveyard, on the Field, in your Hand, etc.

 

For Sara, there are no major problems, just wene to When, Take to Remove, and off to from. For the last two, it doesn't matter if you change them, it just fits more with similar cards like Breaker the Magical Knight. Also Warior should be Warrior.

 

For your last card, Fallen Neine, I see no mistakes.

 

All in all I like them, but I would like to see the rest, as of now, I give 8/10 for being brave enough to put your work up here. Also keep in mind, the comments above are only helpful suggections and you have no obligation to listen to them. If you have questions, just post them here.

 

T.K.

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Tenneko Kazeno Newbie

Tenneko Kazeno

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Okay, new card. Gunner is fairly well made, but a little needs changed on his wording. "As long as this card is face up on the Field, all DARK monsters on your side of the Field gain 500 ATK." I changed any to all, capitulized both fields, put a comma after field, and put dark in a all caps. The effect is exactly the same though. These errors were very small and easy to miss, so I give the card a 9/10

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