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Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion


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jest as i posted in my poll here is the new cards i promised

 

 

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Guren MK-II

Once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field.

 

very simple effect...and for a monster with 2400 ATK is to OP'ed.

just think about it...you have 2 monsters on the field...your opponent has only 1 monster face-up Defense Position with 2500 DEF and it is your turn...you can Tribute the 2 monsters of yours and Summon this guy! So you can activate his effect..so now your opponent is wild open for a direct attack hit!! and if he has 2400 Life Points left...he is a goner!!

 

so my rate is 4/10

but this is my point of view...so come on!! rate!!!

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- You misspelled 'Once', and you should use apostrophes.

- "on your opponent's side of the field" is now "your opponent controls". I like to think I'm not a stickler for keeping up to date with OCG, but the change does make it shorter and simpler, IMO.

- For the second part of the effect, I would personally word it, "This card cannot attack on any turn this effect is used." That's just me though.

- You should use punctuation on the flavor text for the Normal monsters.

 

So far, pretty good. Nice to see that you are willing to take suggestions as well.

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I love the series, massive fan cant wait for R2 to come out next month here in the UK woop woop!! Im going to be starting my own set too soon once I get all the pics I want together...you have made it harder for me now with these ace cards.

 

Guren MkII

Once per turn you can destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field, but it cannot attack this turn if you activate this effect.

 

Like the other two cards (I like a vanilla in a set!!) but the description is a bit too bland, maybe you could expand on it but just my opinion of course. Just to be picky you need to put a capital on Machine lol ;)

 

All in all a good start keep it up player!! 9/10 Like Pharaona I cant wait to see Lancelot.

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