starting of The Rageing Red arch type :) take as look 2/???

[jamora]

[spoiler=Dread Rage Dragon]

 

 

[spoiler=lore]1 Tuner + 1 or more Non-tuner monsters

When this monster is Synchro Summoned remove all Spell and Trap cards from play. Remove this monster from play to Special Summon "Dread Rage Dragon/Assault Mode" to the field in face-up Attack position.

 

 

[spoiler=Dread Rage Dragon/Assult Mode]

 

 

[spoiler=lore]This monster can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 "Dread Rage Dragon" in the graveyard from play. When this monster is Special Summoned remove all Spell, Trap and effect monsters on the field from play. Remove this monster from play to add 1 "Dread Rage Dragon" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

 

I want all the criticism you can give me hopefully it helps :) thx

[Master of Chaos™]

A lot of OCG fixes.Okay let me start with the First one:

 

Dread Rage Dragon

 

1 Tuner + 1 or more Non-tuner monsters

When this monster is Synchro Summoned remove from play all Spell and Trap cards from play. Remove this monster from play to Special Summon "Dread Rage Dragon/Assault Mode" to the field in face-up Attack position.

 

Dread Rage Dragon/Assult Mode

 

This monster cannot be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Dread Rage Dragon" in the graveyard. When this monster is Special Summoned remove from play all Spell, Trap and effect monsters on the field. Remove this monster from play to add 1 "Dread Rage Dragon" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

A lot of OCG fixes but you do know Assault Mode Monsters are usually Summoned with the Trap Card "Assault Mode Activate" Right?Overpowered i'm afraid removing everything on the field without a drawback is too much.But i give it Points for originality.4/10.

[jamora]

ahh thx lol i did them quick so im not really surprised

[pipipa]

I think the whole point of Assault Modes is to use Assault Mode Activate. Anyways, to start off with, when the Assault Mode version is summoned it removes itself from the field.. So how can it remove its self from play to add a Dread Rage Dragon to the owners hands, from the graveyard, if it was removed from play to summon the Assault Mode.

 

Something that is confusing me is the card text on the assault mode, it says something along the lines of add Dread Rage Dragon from your DECK or graveyard to your HAND.

 

Dread Rage is a Synchro Monster, it cannot be in the main deck or the hand. So it should say something like, "Remove this card from play to special summon 1 Dread Rage from your EXTRA deck or graveyard."

 

To be honest, you'd need Burial from a different Dimension because these cards remove themselves from play using their own effects, yet you have to remove them from play (Again?) to summon the alternate version.. Wow I have a headache. Overall I give them a 3/10, I don't mean to be harsh but try and think out the effects and how they will plan out BEFORE you write the card text.

 

Also,, Light Master XX, your OCG Error fix needs a little fix itself :P "This monster cannot be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Dread Rage Dragon" in the graveyard."??

I think it's

"This monster cannot be Special Summoned EXCEPT by removing from play 1 "Dread... etc.

[Master of Chaos™]

Yeah sorry i also made it quickly.Man i am so tired it's like 3 AM in my country.