Ghoulish Posted May 6, 2010 Report Share Posted May 6, 2010 this card is basically about controlling your Graveyard. it would be better to egt it to the field earlier rather then later that way u can control the number or DARK monsters in your Graveyard.(imaged credit: deviant art)[/align] While there are exactly 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard this card can be Special Summoned from your hand or removed from play area. Every time a DARK monster is sent to your Graveyard, you can choose to remove 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard from play and increase this card's ATK by 300 Until the End Phase.comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 Quick OCG fix: You can Special Summon this Card from your hand or if it is removed from play to your side of the field while there are exactly 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard. Every time a DARK monster is sent to your Graveyard, you can remove 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard from play and increase this card's ATK by 300 Until the End Phase. Otherwise good Card it really is Good Support for DARK Decks.9/10 just for the OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 thx for the input but id ont think ur ocg fix is any better? "you can special summon this card from your hand or if it is removed from play", i think "While there are exactly 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard, this card can be Special Summoned from your hand or removed from play area." is a bit better, but might need another opinionl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pipipa Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 Not an expert in OCG but I read Light Master XX's easier. Also, I've never heard of the term "Remove from play AREA". Quite a simple card, and it can be normal summoned aswell not making the 2 DARK monsters in graveyard compulsory. Has the capability to swarm. Good control I give it 8/10. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 i still dpotn see how it is but i dunno, it can be normal summoned normally the special summon is just a bonus. thx for the input Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 great OCG with leaps and set backs9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 thx =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 No i don't know if my fix is better but i made it so that you wouldn't call it removed from play area because there is no such thing.That is like removed from play pile which sounds even worse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 This is a really good card. Great job. People already corrected the OCG so I will say that the pic is good and the effecy is slightly original. Overall 9/10 Great Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 thx =) light master basically all i need is a replacement for removed from play area, but i cant say it the way u put it because it doesn tmake sense really ahh i just got it what do u think bout this "if this card is removed from play or in your hand while there are exactly 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard, then you can Special Summon this card." what do use think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 I'm going to actually post a constructed review. -PicThe picture is awesome. I see some resemblance to Dark Grepher... -BalanceIts stats may be a little strong for a good effect monster-in the first few turns where only 1 or 2 monsters will exist on the field, an extra Special Summon with an reliable 1900 ATK is a bit OP'ed. Maybe make it 1800 or 1750. The revival power is balanced, as chances are you can only use it once or twice. Just, the removing from play and gaining ATK part can be a little OP'ed with D.D. Scout Plane Swarm. And when combined with ATK increase... not really balanced. Dark Grepher plus this equally death. Return from the Different Dimension can also do something devastating like a possible OTK. It's abusable, and slightly OP. Still, the idea and pic are awesome. 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 thx heaps for the spot rate and comment, ill probs have to decrease the atk and def like u said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahmmed6 Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 not ur best work madaa11, hes like a cheap knock off of Dark armed dragon not that original 5.3/10 for effort #_# Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 wow....defs didnt expect that..especially from the previous comments. Soz ahmed but i gotta say do u even know DAD's effect? if u did then ud know that it is totally diferent, for one dad removes to destroy, this removed to maintain a balanced number of cards int he garve, its a support for dad not a replacement, maybe do a lil more research then comment again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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