pretty good ritual card

[Ahmmed6]

 

hope you like em! XD (found on google, didn't draw em)

[byebye360]

That card is awesome,good effect too.

[Ahmmed6]

k, thanks dude ^_^

[RedRaptor10]

uhh i think the names are spelled wrong? shouldn't it be Ancient Fairy Swordsman? and you don't have to say "this card cannot be normal summoned or set" for rituals. the effect is kinda bland no offense. 2/5...for being balanced and having ok pictures

[Ahmmed6]

uhhhh..................ok........the effect is not that bad, it can acually get rid of annoying cards like gravity bind, or needle wall.

[RedRaptor10]

i know it's not bad, it just needs more creativity

[Ahmmed6]

not really, its a rituel card, noone uses em anymore......-_-

[Ghoulish]

yea may need to improve the ocg to summfin lik this for ritual spell:

"This card is used to Ritual Summon Ancient Fairy Swordsmen". You must also Tribute monster(s) whose total level is equal to 6 or more"

For monster acrd:

"This monster can only be Ritual Summoned by using "Black Luster Ritual". You must also Tribute monsters whose level stars are equal to 6 or more as a tribute from the field or your hand. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap card your oppoennt controls."

i think thats right anyway, pretty simple but effective effect, i think maybe increase its star by 1 and add 100 ATK or summfin and ane xtra effect but its up to u =) good job

[Altaïr]

its an....EPIC FAIL!

[pipipa]

Am I the only one who is wondering why this "SwordsMEN" looks so feminine. maybe it should be changed to something like Ancient Fairy Swordswoman or Ancient Fairy Amazon.

[Alcander]

about the 1st card, well the picture looks stretched, bad OCG and it has effect, so how's this a Normal Ritual Monster?

 

Correct OCG for "Ancient Fairy Swordsman":

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Anicent Fairy Blades". Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field.

 

about the 2nd card, hmmm these are blades, but the Ritual Monster just have 1 blade ^^ picture could be better, OCG errors too.

 

Correct OCG for "Ancient Fairy Blades":

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Ancient Fairy Swordsman". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 6 or more from the field or your hand.

 

I have to say that these ones are pretty bad, you are wrong even with card names :/ hope you improve. 4/10 (being nice)

 

its an....EPIC FAIL!

Also dude you're not helping one, try to avoid this posts ^^

[pipipa]

I guess the lesson here is i before e, except after c, and except in weight, and height, and other random words that dont follow the rule :(