My first Set,Say Hello to the Light Brigade!Please Post!

[Master of Chaos™]

Okay so this is my first Set so please criticize and give any honest Comments about them.Okay i am starting from the Strongest and going downward.

 

[spoiler=The Ultimate Light Brigade Monster]

Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effects of "A True King's Arrival". When this card is Summoned, destroy all other monsters on the field. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects, except of its own. When this card is selected as an attack target, you can discard 1 "Light Brigade" monster from your hand to destroy the attacking monster. If this card attacks, you lose half of your Life Points. When this card attacks 3 times, destroy this card and add 1 "Sankara, Protector of the Light Brigade" to your hand.

 

[spoiler=Synchro Monsters][spoiler=Frayda, Ultimate Queen of the Light Brigade]

Lore: Malyla, Winged Queen of the Light Brigade + 1 "Light Brigade" Tuner Monster

 

Summon 1 "Light Brigade" Synchro Monster from your Extra Deck whose Level is equal to the number of Counters you removed, ignoring the Summoning Conditions. f there is a face-up Monster on the field whose ATK is higher than this card's DEF, destroy this card.

 

[spoiler=Meryaz, Princess of the Light Brigade]

Lore: Malyla, Winged Queen of the Light Brigade + 1 "Light Brigade" Tuner Monster

 

When this card is Synchro Summoned select 1 "Light Brigade" Monster in your Deck and Special Summon it. When this card destroys a Monster, place 1 "Light Brigade" Counter on this card. During your Standby Phase, you can remove from play all "Light Brigade" Counters on this card and Special Summon 1 "Light Brigade" Synchro Monster from your Extra Deck whose Level is equal to the number of Counters removed, ignoring the Summoning Conditions. If there is a face-up Monster on the field whose ATK is higher than this card's DEF, destroy this card.

 

 

[spoiler=Hogarth, Prince of the Light Brigade]

Lore:Malyla, Winged Queen of the Light Brigade + 1 "Light Brigade" Tuner Monster

 

When this card is Synchro Summoned, select 1 "Light Brigade" monster in your hand and Special Summon it. During your opponent's Draw Phase, put 1 Light Brigade Counter on this card for each card your opponent draws. During your Standby Phase, you can remove all "Light Brigade" Counters on this card and Special Summon 1 "Light Brigade" Synchro Monster from your Extra Deck whose Level is equal to the number of Counters removed, ignoring the Summoning Conditions. If there is a face-up Monster on the field whose ATK is higher than this card's DEF, destroy this card.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Effect Monsters][spoiler=Warrior of the Light Brigade]

Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 LIGHT monsters. When this card is Summoned, Special Summon the Monsters you Tributed for this card to your opponent's side of the field. This Card gains ATK equal to the number of LIGHT monsters on your opponent's side of the Field X1000. While there is a LIGHT Monster on your opponent's side of the field, this Card cannot be destroyed by card effects. When this Card is selected as an attack target, Decrease this card's ATK equal to the Level of the attacking monster X500.

 

[spoiler=Gaithorn, Angel of the Light Brigade]

Lore:This Card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 "Light Brigade" Monsters. This card gains ATK equal to the Level of the Tributed Monsters X200. This card is not affected by card effects. When this Card is Summoned, you can discard 1 "Light Brigade" Monster to send 1 "Warrior of the Light Brigade" from your Deck to your Graveyard. When this Card destroys a Monster, put 2 "Light Brigade" Counter on this card. If this card is selected as an attack target, you can remove 2 "Light Brigade" Counter from this card to negate the attack. When there are 10 "Light Brigade" Counters on this card, destroy this card and all cards on the field. Then Special Summon 1 "Warrior of the Light Brigade" to your side of the field and as many LIGHT Monsters from your Graveyard to your opponent's side of the field.

 

[spoiler=Malyla, Winged Queen of the Light Brigade]

Lore:This Card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This Card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Light Brigade" Monsters in your Graveyard with different names. When this card is Special Summoned successfully, select 1 Level 4 or lower "Light Brigade" Monster in your hand and Special Summon it. When this card destroys a Monster by Battle place 1 Light Brigade Counter on this card. When this card has 3 Light Brigade Counters on it, destroy this card and put the counters on a Monster they can be put on. This card can only be used for a Synchro Summon of a "Light Brigade" Monster.

 

[spoiler=Freya, Apprentice of the Light Brigade]

Lore:This Card can only be Special Summoned by the Effect of a "Light Brigade" monster.If this card is Normal Summoned, change it to Defense Position. When this Card is Special Summoned, you can send 1 "Light Brigade" Monster from your Deck to your Graveyard to increase the Level of a "Light Brigade" Monster you control by 1.

 

[spoiler=Larissa, Assistant of the Light Brigade]

Lore:When this card is Normal Summoned, you can decrease the Level of a face-up "Light Brigade" monster you control by 1. This card can only be used for a Synchro Summon of a "Light Brigade" Synchro Monster.

 

[spoiler=Sankara, Protector of the Light Brigade]

Lore:When an opponent's Monster attacks you directly, you can discard this card to negate the attack and add 1 "Light Brigade" monster from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

 

[spoiler=Spell Cards]

Lore:This card can only be activated when you control 1 "Frayda, Ultimate Queen of the Light Brigade", "Meryaz, Princess of the Light Brigade" and "Hogarth, Prince of the Light Brigade". Tribute 1 "Frayda, Ultimate Queen of the Light Brigade", "Meryaz, Princess of the Light Brigade" and "Hogarth, Prince of the Light Brigade" and Special Summon 1 "Dakar, King of the Light Brigade" from your hand or Deck.

Lore:When this card is activated, put Light Brigade Counters on this card equal to the number of "Light Brigade" Monsters you control. Each time a Light Brigade Counter is put on a Monster you control, you can remove 1 Light Brigade Counter from this Card to put another Light Brigade Counter on one of your Monsters. When there are 10 or more Light Brigade Counters on this Card, destroy this card and Special Summon "Light Brigade" Monsters from your Deck whose combined Level is equal to the Counters removed from this card.

Lore: This card can only be equipped to a "Light Brigade" monster. The selected monster gains 800 ATK and DEF. When the selected monster is attacking, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap Cards.

Lore:This card can only be activated when a "Light Brigade" Monster you control attacks an opponent's monster. The attacking monster has his ATK doubled until the End of the Damage Step. During your End Phase, destroy the attacking monster and take Damage equal to the attacking monster's Level X500.

 

[spoiler=Trap Cards]

Lore:This card can only be activated while you control a "Light Brigade" monster and your opponent activates a Monster, Spell or Trap card effect. Tribute 1 "Light Brigade" Monster, negate the effect and destroy the activated Card.

Lore:When you draw a "Light Brigade" Monster, you can discard 2 Spell or Trap Cards to your Graveyard and send the drawn monster to the Graveyard. Special Summon it During your next Standby Phase. Destroy this Card during the 3rd Standby Phase after activation.

Lore:You can activate this card while you control 3 or more "Light Brigade" monsters and your opponent's monster declares an Attack. Destroy all Monster Cards on the field and Special Summon 1 "Light Brigade" monster from your Deck, ignoring the Summoning conditions.

 

 

Okay i worked really hard on them so i want to know your honest opinion.So please comment and i hope you like them.:)

[Parion555]

Hey Light Master what's up?You're on the computer as well ha?Well it seems you have completed a big part of your first Set.But let's get back to Topic.The set is pretty good if you ask me.The first one(the King better said)would look overpowered if it wasn't a constant Solemn Judgment and it gets destroyed after 3 Attacks so i guess it's balanced enough.The Synchro Monsters are surely concentrated on Summoning more of themselves on the Field so the King can come out for a Quick Finish. The Effect Monsters are interesting because most of them seem to also concentrate on Summoning the Synchro Monsters except the 2 Stronger Monsters who concentrate on Supporting themselves.As for the Spells and Traps they are as i see a lot used for Protection or Destruction and some for Gaining Counters and adding Attack.However i am pretty sure that this Set is based around Summoning the King.But however it's a great set bringing your Score to 10/10.It really seems like you worked hard on it.

[Master of Chaos™]

Thanks Parion i really worked hard on this Set and yes it is supposed to bring out the King faster he is like a 3 Turn Walking Death.Anyway thanks i really appreciate getting a 10/10 on this Set from you.

[Master of Chaos™]

Anyone else?

[Master of Chaos™]

Come on is no one going to reply to my Set?

[pipipa]

I can see the effort put into the set. So I don't want to be too critical with the review.

 

Firstly your key card. The king. there are some OCG errors but I understand the card perfectly, and IMO that's the main thing. I believe it is balanced to an extent, because of the summoning conditions. I like the effect, but I don't think "When this card is selected as an attack target, you can discard 1 "Light Brigade" monster from your hand to destroy the attacking monster." is really needed, I don't know who would want to attack a 4000 ATK and DEF monster as it is rare to see a monster peak that high. However if you do want that effect, maybe you should consider lowering the DEF to about 2500, so if an opponent changes it to DEF position, you could utilize that effect. The picture confused me at first, because I looked firstly towards the girl in the picture, and I was thinking "King? O,O" but then I saw the bigger one. After seeing the Kings effect I dont really know why and who that girl is in the picture, you obviously struggled to find a good one.

 

Now the Synchros, "Frayda, Ultimate Queen of the Light Brigade" is missing some of its card lore, so I had a hard time gathering the effects, but I know most of them are to do with the counters and the Special summoning of the other Synchros. However I think it looks a bit hard to do, so I'd consider tweaking the effect, because if you want to add a key card into a MAIN deck, you want to make sure it's USABLE, not just a dead draw.

 

You have many effect monsters so I'll make this brief, your Warrior of the Light Brigade is missing a name, unless you want to make him mysterious as that matches the Picture. But I do find him VERY UPed. When this Card is selected as an attack target, Decrease this card's ATK equal to the Level of the attacking monster X500. if your opponent has 3 of ur LIGHT monsters on their side of the field, thats at least 3000 attack, so if a level 4 monster, that usually has 1700+ ATK, attacks ur Warrior, your warrior is already down to 1000 ATK. Making it more of a one turn card. If I were you I'd lower the attack loss to about 300 the most. Also, ? ATK and ? DEF is used for monsters that gain attack ONE TIME ONLY, and then that time they gain the attack, it becomes their ORIGINAL attack. If Warrior's attack keeps fluctuating because of the monsters on ur opponents side of the field and selected as an attack target, then I suggest making his original ATK 0 and DEF 0.

 

After having a look at the rest of your effect monsters, I noticed the lack of strong ones that can be normal summoned, and I noticed in some of ur other effects, they allow you to normal summon Level 4 or unders. One monster did stand out to me though, in a slightly OPed way. "Sankara, Protector of the Light Brigade". This slightly Kuriboh inspired Light Brigade monster is OPed IMO because it states you can add, after the card was discarded to the graveyard, a LB(lightbrigade) monster back to ur hand. But using this logic you could bring back Sankara, and continuously abuse her effect, in ANY deck, not just LB. So I'd change Sankara to state that "Add a "Light Brigade" monster to your hand, except "Sankara, Protector of the Light Brigade"" or something along those lines.

 

A true kings arrival- I love the name, and actually quite astonished that you didnt use the words LIGHT BRIGADE in the card name, because personally I think it's overused. It's alright to use it for all of your monsters, however when it gets towards Spell and trap cards, it seems a little Overused(for example some of ur other Spells/traps) Look at the Lightsworn Archetype, (I'm sure you have since you must of got the inspiration from this set from their staple card "Charge of the LIGHT BRIGADE") not all of the spells and traps have Lightsworn in it, and that's mainly because they don't need to, as that archetype and so do yours, only deal with monsters with Light____ in a MONSTER name, not a spell or trap.

 

With ur Field spell, read the effect, how is the card meant to GAIN any counters if when its activated, it gains maximum 5, and the effect only allows you to remove the counters, meaning you could never use its last effect, because it cannot gain 10 in the first place.

 

I like sword of the light brigade, a good basic effect, doesn't really support the archetype but I guess not all cards can be. OCG errors in Ultimate power of the LB, and makes it a little hard to understand. it seems a little UPed considering the LP loss, so what i would do to change it is something like this"This card can only be activated during the battle phase while you control a "Light Brigade" monster. Double the ATK of the selected monster.. and so forth" Being able to use it in ur opponents turn makes it useful as a Quick-play spell card.

 

Barrier of the LB sounds a bit OPed, mainly because all you have to have is an LB monster on ur side of the field, you are not tributing it or letting ur opponent gain anything from destroying their card. So I'd add something in there to balance it out.

 

Key of the LB seems pointless, the only monsters that can be special summoned outside of their effects are like level 3 or below, I'd personally rather normal summon them than discard 2 valuble spell and trap cards and wait a whole turn for the Special summon, but I suppose this leaves it open if you were to add any more LB effect monsters of a higher level. Also it says its a continuous trap card, but why? It could easily just be a normal. If I were you I'd level out the effect, (for example, removing 2 LB counters by activating the card instead, this includes the archetype).

 

And last but not least, reflection of the LB, to be honest I'm really worn out from writing this essay on ur set that I can't see many faults, just be sure to add more LB monsters to widen the range of monsters someone could select.

 

Overall, this set is amazing, and hopefully if you listen to the tweaks I've suggested, I hope you can improve it even more. The pictures are perfect for the monstereffect/spell or trap effect. And I apologize for anything that doesnt make sense in this post, I can't be bothered to preview it and iron out any typos.

 

I just wish someone would comment on my cards as I've commented on yours. Actually, I'd appreciate any comments so anyone reading please do.

 

LOL, i forgot to even give a rating. As they stand 7/10. And I'm only being harsh because there are things that you could easily change. I imagine once you sort these things out, your set would be worthy of a 10/10. :D

[Master of Chaos™]

Well thanks for the Post really appreciate it and about the Kingdom Spell Card i meant to put each time a Light Brigade Counter is removed from a Card on your side of the field except this card,put the amount of Counters removed to this Card.I meant to put it because like that it gains Counters and Supports the Monsters.

[pipipa]

Np, I happily evaluate a clearly original Set ^^