gwarg1 Posted May 8, 2010 Report Share Posted May 8, 2010 Can you please comment my card.... Because I noticed how people seems to be allergic to helping a young card maker out nowadays... Life Shocker Card Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Machine-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is selcted as an attack target, negate the attack and remove this card from play. Special Summon this card during the End Phase. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy 1 card on the field. All phote credit goes to Alcander's Custom Image Archive!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted May 8, 2010 Report Share Posted May 8, 2010 Creative effect, though kinda bland (I love really long effects). Pic is a only a little bit blurry.9/10Youre good for a newbie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwarg1 Posted May 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2010 Thanx..... I dont understand how is it bland but thnx for commentin bro :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted May 8, 2010 Report Share Posted May 8, 2010 Thanx..... I dont understand how is it bland but thnx for commentin bro :) I would love to see counters, or special summoning or tributing. Like, at the end: "Each time this effect is activated insert 1 Counter on this card. This card gains 200 ATK for each counter" for example. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwarg1 Posted May 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2010 O i understand where your coming from but I thought that was as much as I could do because with the act that he practically cant be destroyed I didnt want him to be a beat stick.. I tried to make it balanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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gwarg1 Posted May 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 any comments or ocg errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 very creative effect. could come in very handy, specially for straight-up brawler-type players. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djangosp2 Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Love it! Great effect sweet pic not Op'd does'nt suck Woot! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwarg1 Posted May 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Thanx guyz!! appreciate the luv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Huge mistake here:- This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2... - negate the attack and remove this card from play. Special Summon this card during the End Phase. Also last part its kinda weird, it would be better this way IMO:...negate the attack and remove this card from play. Then Special Summon this card during the End Phase of the turn it was removed from play by it's own effect. also add the other summoning condition:This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Machine-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play and by it's own effect. Picture it's blurry, copy it manually with GIMP for better results although this could be useful, balanced and your OCG is great for a newb. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwarg1 Posted May 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Thanks for the tips. I agree with the summoning part but as far as the last part i dont agree becuz thats exactly how stardust dragon effect is written. I got the last part directly from stardust dragon... Thanx for the comment and rating.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Nice, sorta like a reusable "Multidimensional Matter Transporter" (I think that's what it's called) with the perk of destroying a card when it comes back. I'm glad it's level 5 because it would have been OP as a lower level, I think. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwarg1 Posted May 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Zetaru, I kno...lol. A 4 star monster with an effect that good is intense...lol... Easily considered overpowered... Thanx for the rating bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 But still, I don't really think the level matters because the summoning condition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwarg1 Posted May 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 true!!! but it could still be easily trap holed or anythinh like dat tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cruelnoob200 Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Can you please comment my card.... Because I noticed how people seems to be allergic to helping a young card maker out nowadays...ROTFL!!!! LOVe that quote you sould put that in your sig XDgreat card no OCG errorslove the pic KEEP IT UP!10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwarg1 Posted May 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Thanx... I just mite make that a sig...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 at the first summone it will destroy 1 card then each time a monster attack it it will destroy another, so it could be OP with some cards that change the target like "shift","Call of the Earthbound" or "Patrician of Darkness".my rate 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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