cHECK OUT THE 2 NEW CARDS I MADE SHOULD ME IN MY NEXT PACK!!!!!!!!!

[gwarg1]

Check out these and comment and rate plz!!! I only become a legendary card maker if u guys tell me how to improve... So thank u and plz help me out:

 

Android Punisher

 

Card Lore:

If your opponent attacks you directly and inflicts 2000 or more direct damage, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. When this card attacks your opponent directly roll a six sided die.

1-3: Destroy all set cards on the field.

4-6: Destroy all face-up cards on the field.

 

Eurigami Titan of Misery

 

Card Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summed by tributing 3 Fiend-Type monsters on your side of the field. Once per turn, You may select 1 of your opponents monsters and equip it to this card. You can send 1 equip card equipped to this card to the Graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field. When this card is destroyed, Destroy the equipped card instead. If this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, select 1 equip card from your deck or Graveyard and add it to your hand.

 

Once again I'm only tryna get better at this so even if its a negative or positive comment. It doesn't matter!!!! Plz dont just read and move on.. because alot of yall do it.. thank you

 

P.S: All pic credit goes to Alcander and JP Doom.. Sorry if I mispronouncede your usernames :)

[RedRaptor10]

Android Punisher:

"During your opponent's turn, if you take 2000 or more Battle Damage from a direct attack, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. When this card attacks your opponent directly, roll a six-sided-die. If the result is 1, 2, or 3, destroy all Set cards on the field. If the result is 4, 5, or 6, destroy all face-up cards on the field."

 

^^I looked at Skull Archfiend of Lightning's OCG. The card looks great, but could probably be overpowered. The idea is nice and original. 2/5

 

Eurigami Titan of Misery:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summed by Tributing 3 Fiend-Type monsters. Once per turn, you can select 1 of your opponent's monsters and equip it to this card (You can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card). You can send 1 Equip Card equipped to this card to the Graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is destroyed, destroy the equipped monster instead. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, select 1 Equip Card from your Deck or Graveyard and add it to your hand."

 

^^That's an interesting effect. I looked at Relinquished's OCG. The reason why I said "select 1 Equip Card from your Deck or Graveyard" is cuz you "return" cards from your Graveyard, but you don't "return" cards from your Deck. So, I said "select". I think it's overpowered cuz you can destroy 2 of your opponent's monsters. And if your opponent tries to destroy it in any way, you can just destroy your opponent's monster instead. But it is still a useful card for Equips. 2/5

[longrod31394]

well, you got the right idea with pictures, they look fantastic :]

1st card could be abused, but still a good car ya got there.

7.5/10

[gwarg1]

Trust Me!! I know that Titan of Misery is Overpowered.. But in the pack I have cards that counter act with it... I dont think that android punisher is over powered because it has to attack directly and it only has 2200 ATK.

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Thnx tho!! :)

[destron]

The first is OP'd because it clears the field, allowing you to use its effect over and over, meaning your opponent has to have face-up and face-down spells/traps defending him/her, so that can get pretty ugly pretty fast.

 

The second is OP'd. As long as your opponent keeps putting monsters on their side of the field, which they pretty much have to to defend their LP, this guy is invincible.

 

OCG errors, some of which are obvious, such as the fact that the first sentence of the first card is a fragment, although I know what you meant to say.

 

PLEASE GIVE IMAGE CREDIT

 

I'll not have you using images from others without following their rules, especially since Alcander is one of my best friends on this site.

 

6.5/10

[gwarg1]

O Snap I'm so stupid..lol... I didnt even notice the incomplete sentence and dont mistake me as rude. I use his pics alot and this is the 1st time i didnt credit him. I was just in a rush to post it I'll handle it now... Sorry Alcander lol

[destron]

XD

 

Ya, fix the OCG ad I'll raise my rate.

[gwarg1]

I think I fixed the OCG...

[gwarg1]

Any comments anyone