My first card set

[HawK5007]

Hello,this is my first card set.I haven't played Yu-Gi-Oh for about 6 years and I forgot some things.This card set is inspired by the game Star Craft 2 Beta.I know this set isn't very good so please tell me how can I improve.Thanks for reading and please rate.

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-Zealot,a common warrior of the Protoss species,it might not be very powerful but when it's defeated,instead of going into graveyard it comes back to the casters deck.

-Warp Ray is a monster that gains each turn for the duration of 4 turns,350 attack.

-The Stalker is a spider like robot built for fast and strong attack.In the turn when he is cast he can't be attacked.

-Phoenix is a strong warrior with weak defense.When Phoenix is destroyed,it inflicts 100 damage to the player,by exploding.

-The phase Prism is a shield robot.When an monster is attacked,the Phase Prism "sacrifices" and gets hit instead.

-Immortal,a special warrior from the Protoss species,If you have 3 or more Immortals on the field,you can cast the card "Immortal Barrier"

-Immortal Barrier is cast when a player haves 3 or more Immortals.For each Immortal on the field an additional 100ATK and 200DEF is added to each Immortal

-Dark Templar is an advanced Zealot with the special ability that when he is cast he becomes invisible for one turn.

-Colossus is a very strong spider like robot that can destroy Trap Cards.

-The Mother Ship is the ultimate weapon of the Protoss specie.Mother Ship has 3 special abilities.

-"Planet Cracker"

-"Black Hole"

-"Cloak Field"

-Planet Cracker is a special ability of Mother Ship.Planet Cracker allows the Mother Ship to attack 3 monsters at once.

-Black Hole is a special ability of the Mother Ship.This ability allows the mother ship to send to graveyard 3 monsters with the defense lower than 2000

-"Cloak Field" is a ability used by Mother Ship.This card makes all your monsters invincible for 3 turns by making them invisible.

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[The White Wolf]

some errors here and there, pics are good so:

 

6/10

[ABB]

2/10. Those 2 points because I'm a Starcraft Veteran. Those aren't even effect monsters. I know you are trying but those are Normal palettes. Use the effect ones and the colossus isn't a gemini. The OCG is massively so horrible. http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page is a site where you can look up cards and see how to write them and what effect monsters are.

[HawK5007]

Alright thanks for comments,looks like I have to work really hard at my next card set.

[The White Wolf]

oh, he's right, never noticed that, gonna have to lower the rate I gave it before:

 

2/10

[RAGNOROK6]

Ummm...?/10

Bad

No normal monsters can have effects.

[Daigusto Sphreez]

Few of your cards have effects and those that do aren't specific. 'This card can go invisible' or this card can 'destroy trap cards' is useless given that you haven't said what conditions it can do these actions in, or which phase. OCG is poor. The cards are also vastly underpowered (7 star card with 1250 attack, 700 defense and no effect?).

 

Despite the background being blank, the pictures are nice and in keeping with the set though.