Ancient Gear Industry Golem!!! ... Maadd1 (No stupid Comments Plz!)

[Ghoulish]

new ancient gear that i think is an improvemtn to golem, though it dloesnt really need it. I added the 1000 paying of life points part because it seeemed opd, buttt ancient gear golem doeesnt really have qany Draw backs? so tell me if you think i should leave it or take it out thx.

 

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summmoned from your hand or Graveyard when a face-up "Ancient Gear Golem" you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by your opponent's card effect. When this card is Summoned to the field increase this card's ATK and DEF by half of the combined original ATK of all monsters your opponent controls until your next End Phase. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. While you control this face-up card neither player can Set monsters. Pay 1000 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases, if you don't then destroy this card. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard Special Summon from your Graveyard 1 "Ancient Gear Golem" with 1000 less ATK ignoring the Summoning conditions". The summoned monster cannot declare an attack and its effect negated.

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pic credit to jazin kay

 

NEW CARD ADDED

 

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summmoned from your hand when a face-up "Ancient Gear Beast" you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by your opponent's card effect. When this card is Summoned to the field increase this card's ATK and DEF by half of the combined original ATK of all monsters your opponent controls until your next End Phase. When this card declares an attack your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap cards until after the Damage Step. While you control this face-up card neither player can Set monsters. Pay 800 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases, if you don't then destroy this card. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard Special Summon from your Graveyard 1 "Ancient Gear Beast" with 1000 less ATK. The Summoned monster cannot declare an attack and its effect negated.

[Ghoulish]

? whats rong ewith them that u rate them that low...im not posting anymore, theres plenty u can come up with man just read the effects...

[DarkForce™]

5/10 for both. Not to thrilled with the images. Could've done alot better.

[Ghoulish]

i love bad ratings with no explanations, u say "couldve been better" now i assume u have a reason for this or u see some sort of misfunction, if so "POINT IT OUT".

[longrod31394]

the pictures are unique and for some reason im drawn to them. i lol'd at how the text on the cards look like stripes XD

[Ghoulish]

ok absed on some of ur opinions for the first card: first of all its only when golem is destroyed by a acard effect that he comes out, and with 2000 ATK when hes reborn i doubt a pserson wouldnt just atk him, secondly the summoned golem cant attack or have its effecta ctivated so its pointless ont he field, dunno how its Opd but oh well, now the other parts i replaced the cant activate spells or traps during damage step part because i added the combined original atk thing. So if u think that having a 2000 ATK unattacking no effect ancient ggear golem on the field is Opd then ok

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but thx for the input

[~Shin~]

"first of all its only when golem is destroyed by a acard effect that he comes out"

Who will destroy a 3000 ATK monster with battle ?

"and with 2000 ATK when hes reborn i doubt a pserson wouldnt just atk him,"

Easily change it to defense position (3000 DEF).

"secondly the summoned golem cant attack or have its effecta ctivated so its pointless ont he field"

No, it is a monster with high DEF so it can not be easliy destroyed by battle.

"dunno how its Opd"

I do not know what 'dunno' mean.. I think it is 'tell me how it is opd' so I say:

since golem have 3000 DEF you opponent will use an effect to destroy it.. or he have to wite some time to have high ATK monster. after he use the effect you can summon "Industry Golem" agein and have its effects (When this card is Summoned to the field increase this card's ATK and DEF by half of the combined original ATK of all monsters your opponent controls until your next End Phase) (When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.) you can keep doing i

this way until you win.

"So if u think that having a 2000 ATK unattacking no effect ancient ggear golem on the field is Opd then ok"

No. I know so.

[spoiler=fast tip]

DID NOT THINK ALOT.

and I think all this "When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. While you control this face-up card neither player can Set monsters." should be taked out and "with 1000 less ATK" should be changed to "with 600 less ATK and DEF" so your opponent have some more chances.

 

You are welcome.

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[spoiler=older post]

6/10.

5.8/10

good ideas.

I can not say more now, maybe if you have any more cards to add I will came up with something.

 

OK, re-rating.Happy Yo ?!

[spoiler=I]

from the second effect any one will know that this card is bad I mean what will make me like to have this card in hand or graveyard to summon it when "Ancient Gear Golem" is destroyed ?

you may say to have another powerful monster.

I say so what he well destroy it 2 with another effect.

you may say so I will summon "Ancient Gear Golem" with 2000 ATK.

I say exactly that mean you can make "Ancient Gear Industry Golem" get back to the field agein then "Ancient Gear Golem" is back then "Ancient Gear Industry Golem" come and do his job (When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.) after that you agein can summon "Ancient Gear Golem" only if he can have -1000 ATK or jusy stay on 0 ATK (since the effect was not saying any thing about it) but 3000 DEF this is why it is bad and OP card first it will make your opponent boring and it will make you win easily you just have to make a deck that allows you to summon "Ancient Gear Golem" in no time and portect him from trap or spell then add your "Ancient Gear Industry Golem" in it to have a sure win deck.. Congratulations.

"Pay 1000 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases, if you don't then destroy this card." so if I did not pay this card is send to the graveyard "When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard Special Summon from your Graveyard 1 "Ancient Gear Golem" with 1000 less ATK ignoring the Summoning conditions." WOW OP.

[spoiler=Fix]

"When this card is Summoned, increase its ATK and DEF by half of the combined original ATK of all monsters your opponent controls until your next End Phase."

[spoiler=II]SOON

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=II]

only if you limited the number of times you can get "Ancient Gear Beast" and take out "While you control this face-up card neither player can Set monsters" it will be good card

 

Still there is a big chace that the first attack of both card can make your opponent lose.

[Ghoulish]

ok changes: "you can Special, Summon 1 Ancient Gear Golem from your Graveyard to face-up Attack Position, with 1000 Less ATK and DEF, it cannot declare an attack and its effect s negated", also ill take out the "ingflicxt damage tyooponent life point equal toit he destoyed monsters atk, and replace it with peircing damage. The intention however wasto make the golem into ATK Poiston so it would be destroyed easier, i just didnt specify. But thx for te cometn and input