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Blue-Eyes White Majestic Dragon

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Card Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon". Increase the ATK of this card by the ammount of Dragon-Type monsters in your graveyard x200. Your opponent cannot activate any trap card while this card is attacking. When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" or "Ultimate Blue-Eyes White Dragon"

 

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I think the cirrect termonology would be when this card attacks your opponent cannot activate any spell or traps card until the end of the damage step or something like that. The only thing I see with this is that as soon as you get it out your gonna want it to be destroyed since it can only reach maybe 3800 max before getting removed or something, but when it is destroyed you get a 4500 ATK monster? At least make it so that you have to remove appropriate cards from you hand, deck, or graveyard to compensate for it.

 

7.7/10

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I'd say a little op'd as "Alien Masta" said, you should really make it a Snychro monster. And take of the part of Special Summoning Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon. If you got the chance to summon blues eyes ultimate dragon without a fusion summon would you even care that you could also summon blue eyes?

How I Critic your Cards:

 

Image - 2/10 (Blurry=-1 Bad pic=-2)

"A little blurry, but otherwise, good pic. -1 (1/10)"

OCG-2/10 (Minor Errors=-1 Major Errors=-2)

"Only some minor errors people took care of already. -1 (1/10)"

Effect- 3/10 (Up'd=-1 Op'd=-2 Stupid/Useless Effect=-3) "I guess the effect is OK but a bit Op'd. -2 (1/10)"

Stats- 2/10 (Wrong Leveling=-1 Bad name=-1 Unrelated set ID=-1) "Stats good! (2/10)"

Idea- 1/10 (Bad Idea=-1) "Good idea! (1/10)

 

Without Add. Terms: 6/10

 

Additional Terms

-2 for made up types.

"It's a Dragon-Type, so this part is void. (0/10)"

+1 for creative effect/title/name.

"I like the title! +1 (1/10)"

-1 for inapproproiate picture (I.e. Porn)

"No porn thus this is also void. (0/10)"

+1 for unity (Effect, pic, and name are good together).

"Liked it. Went together good! +1 (1/10)

-4 for "Bad Mouthing" my opinion. Don't make me mad! :P lol!

"Didn't bad mouth yet so your good! (0/10)"

 

Add. Term: +2

 

Rating Total: 8/10. Good card!

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The picture is great, the effect needs editing though. Like the above said, why have Blue Eyes as a selection when you can special summon Ultimate Dragon. The only reason Blue Eyes should be a selection is if you have burst stream of destruction in your hand. It has a built in trap jammer and Shining dragon effect so I would take out the Power increase or it would basically be an edited version of Shining dragon.

 

I would at least give it 3300 attack and 2700 defense to make it slightly different and not a boosted blue eyes.

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