Hello to all My First cards : Earthquake

[Rosuke]

Hello this is The Are my first cards , but i studed how the other make's cards for like 1 or 2 week's :D Rate Please

 

Lore : Flip:Flip Face Down every monster card in your Adversary Field. Durantly your Adversary end Phase pay 900 life points to Flip Down this monster ,When This Card is Destroyed by Battle Send it to Play out.

 

Lore : Flip: You Can Pick A Monster with ``Earthquake`` in its name from your Deck or Graveyard Lvl 5 or More And Special Summon it Tributing This Card

 

 

Lore ( The Larges't one ) : ``Earthquake Dragon`` + Any Fire Tribute Monster

Each Time a Monster with ``Earthquake`` in its name is Destroyed Put 1 ``Overheat Counter`` in this card (Max 3) Tribute This Card With 3 ``Overheat Counter`` To Destroy all The Monsters In Every Field and Inflict Top Your Adversary Life Points Damage Equal to The Atk of The Monsters Destroyed by This Effect .

 

 

Lore : Flip:Search For a ``Earthquake Worm`` And add it to your hand , When This Card is Used for Tribute The Monster summoned Earn 600 Def Points.

 

Lore : Pick 2 Monsters in your Field Equip The One with More Atk Points To The Other One Increase the Atk And Def Of The Monster Selected Equal to the Atk Points of the Monster Equipped .

 

 

Thanks ^^ Sorry for my OCG My main Language is Spanish .

[NeXodus]

Yeah, for your first cards, the OCG is awful.

There are alot of errors but the pics are ok.

6/10

[DX DX USER]

Okay, no card has "Adversary" or "Play Out" in their text. You need to work on your OCG.

5/10.

[Rosuke]

Thanks Corezero what i can Change to it get a little Better?

[NeXodus]

Thanks Corezero what i can Change to it get a little Better?

 

Go and read this whole thing:

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-167644.html

[cruelnoob200]

HAHAHAHHAA I CANT STOP LAUGHING AT THE OCG ON THESE CARDS!!!

these sound like those fake cards my friend has..

anyway i dont want to make fun of you in any way so i am going to ignore the OCG errors.

i dont understand the object of this set but i love the pics...

you should probably make spanish cards.. that would be interesting and new(to me at least)

7.3/10

[Rosuke]

Spanish Cards ? That's a Good Idea :P and i know my OCG Suck a lot XD

[Wrathos]

The OCG isn't the main issue. The main issue is your horrendous spelling and grammar. What country are you from?

 

And what kind of word is "Durantly"?

[Rosuke]

Uruguay Durantly = During