Yondaime Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 [align=center][spoiler=I've made a lot of tags in the 3 month period, but I haven't finished any of them. This is the only one. I know it's bad, but w/e. Cnc anyways. First time smudging btw. Colors looked a lot better on my laptop >>]V1.V2. [spoiler=When I sharpened it it looked different on my main computer. This is what it should look like.]V1V2 [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Pretty nice. Not your best though. :/ I lik V2 better, the other way doesn't look right. Not bad smudge btw. Pretty good for first time. The lighting behind his head is distracting, but it might just be me. :p Can't wait to see more Yondy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted May 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Yea, when I flipped it I was like "Holy crap, this is so much better." And I kinda messed up the smudging. It was better when I originally did it. And Thanks GHawk =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Ehh kinda bland and boring. A bit more effects would do it good. The lighting fails on the right of the second version. And yah thats it, keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 You're going to make me start again, you know? Everything said pretty much but lighting makes hair look oversharpened. <3 that your back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Flip is better. Also, waaaaaaaaaaaay overcontrasted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Too sharp. Very monochromic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted May 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Most of the comments say over sharpened. It wasn't this bad on my laptop. Trust me. @Lz I hope it does make you start again. ;D Ehh kinda bland and boring. A bit more effects would do it good. The lighting fails on the right of the second version. And yah thats it' date=' keep at it.[/quote'] Not sure if I'm reading this wrong, but I wasn't trying to go for any lighting on the right of the second version. Care to explain? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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