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[makelo]

2 - Headed Bird Beast

Effect

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 2 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard from play. When this card is sucessfully Special Summoned, both players discard 1 card from his hands. When this card destroy a opponent's monster as result of Battle, you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower FIRE monster from your hand to the field.

 

Black Darkness Dragon

Effect

This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is sucessfully Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned by tributing 2 Dragon-Type monsters, you can return 2 Dragon-Type monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. When this monster attacks and destroy a opponent's monster as result of Battle, you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your hand. When this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove it from play to Special Summon 1 "Black Dragon Token" (Dragon-Type/DARK/3 Stars/ATK 1000/DEF 1600) in Defense Position.

 

Mega - Thunder Flying Beast

Effect

When this card is sucessfully Tribute Summoned, bot players loses 800 Life Points. When this monster declares an attack, reduce the ATK of this card by 500 until the End Phase. If your opponent negate the Attack of this monster, you can destroy 1 card on the field and put 1 Counter on this card (Max.3). When this card haves 3 Counters, send it to the Graveyard to increase your Life Points by 1000.

 

Sacred Ice Dragon

Effect

This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. When this card is sucesfully Summoned, you can remove up 2 cards from the opponent's Graveyard from play.Once per turn, if this monster declares an attack, you can return this card to your hand to destroy 1 Face-up opponent's monster. During your next's Standby Phase, you can discard this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Sacred Ice Dragon" from your hand.

 

Tarox Bladewing

Effect

You can Normal Summon this card without tributes. If you Normal Summon this card this way, send 2 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard. During the Battle Phase, you can remove up 2 cards of your Graveyard from play to increase the ATK of this monster by 500 until the End Phase. This effect can be activated in either Battle Phase.

 

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[makelo]

Any comment?

[T3RA PROWL3R]

[spoiler=[b]Two-Headed[/b] Bird Beast Fixes]

-"his hands." should be "their hand."

-"destroy" should be "destroys"

-Put "a" in between "result" and "battle"

-"f" in "field" should be capitalized.

 

[spoiler=Black Darkness Dragon Fixes]

-"a" in "attacks" should be capitalized

-"destroy" should be "destroys"

-"When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard,"

-"Black Dragon Token" should be "Black Dragon" Token

-put "face-up" in between "in" and "Defense"

 

[spoiler=Mega Thunder Flying Warrior Fixes]

-"bot" should be "both"

-"loses" should be "lose"

-"monster" shoud be "card"

-" If your opponent negate the Attack of this monster," should be "If your opponent activates a card effect in response to this card's Attack,"

-"haves" should be "has"

-"send it to the Graveyard to increase your Life Points by 1000." should be "you can send it to the Graveyard to increase your Life Points by 1000 for each Counter on it." to make it more balanced

 

[spoiler=Sacred Ice Dragon Fixes]

-Add "to" in between "up" and 2"

-"from the" should be "in your"

-"monster" should be "card"

-"F" in "Face-up" should be lower case

-"next's" should be "next"

-"from your hand" should be put in between "discard this card" and "to the Graveyard"

 

[spoiler=Tarox Bladewing Fixes]

-"Normal Summon this card this way" should be "do"

-"the" should be "either player's" (This eliminates the very last effect)

-"to" should be in between "up" and "2"

-"of" should be "in"

-"monster" should be "card"

 

 

I know this may be a little overwhelming, but please bear with me and don't complain.

[makelo]

sorry for the grammar errors but i really speak espanish

i cant speak english 100% ^^

[T3RA PROWL3R]

Ok. Well, I'll type up the new effects for you.

 

Are you from Mexican/Spanish-speaking countries, or born into a North-American Spanish-speaking family?

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Well, after further review, I realized that I am not really feeling like typing all of the effects, probably because there isn't really anything to motivate me. To me, these aren't the most special cards, but they have pretty good concepts. My favorite is probably "Black Darkness Dragon".