NeXodus Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 [spoiler=Lore:]This card cannot be Special Summoned. You can discard 1 card from you hand and destroy 1 card on your opponent's field. You lose 1000 Life Points when this card is sent to the Graveyard. While this card is in the Graveyard, you and your opponent must discard 1 card from the top of your decks during your Draw Phase. If that card is a Spell or Trap Card, you or your opponent lose 500 Life Points. This card can attack your opponent directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 ahem [spoiler=]blu = goodred = badgreen = suggestions in next spoiler This card cannot be Special Summoned. You can discard 1 card from you hand and destroy 1 card on your opponent's field. You lose 300 Life Points when this card is sent to the Graveyard. While this card is in the Graveyard, you and your opponent must discard 1 card from the top of your decks during your Draw Phase. If that card is a Spell or Trap Card, you or your opponent lose 500 Life Points. This card can attack your opponent directly. [spoiler=]You lose 300 Life Points when this card is sent to the Graveyard. While this card is in the Graveyard, you and your opponent must discard 1 card from the top of your decks during your Draw Phase. If that card is a Spell or Trap Card, you or your opponent lose 500 Life Points. This card can attack your opponent directly. way op'ed and there are parts that dont make sense also gramatical errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted May 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 um, I dont see any gramatical errors...if you would kindly point them out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 oh i appologize i made a mistake you did this Draw Phase but thats how it is supposed to be my appologies and i am going to give 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted May 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huh? Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 OP'd, but I love the idea. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Change it from 300 Life Points to 1000? 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted May 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Change it in the Lore but I don't have the card so I can change it. On the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huh? Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 "If that card is a Spell or Trap Card, you or your opponent lose 500 Life Points." is that supposed to be and? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted May 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 "If that card is a Spell or Trap Card' date=' you [b']or[/b] your opponent lose 500 Life Points." is that supposed to be and? NO, it means if yu draw a spell or trap card, you lose 500 Life Points.Vice Versa. Not both of you lose Life Points. Rate card plox> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huh? Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 OP'd' date=' but I love the idea. 8/10.[/quote']I did rate. And if it means you lose 500 life points, say that please. Not "You or your opponent" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HawK5007 Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Kinda OP'ed but i love it 8.5/10OP'd' date=' but I love the idea. 8/10.[/quote']I did rate. And if it means you lose 500 life points, say that please. Not "You or your opponent"...Ahem let me explain you.If you draw a spell or a trap card,you lose 500points.If your opponent draws a spell or trap card he loses 500points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted May 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Kinda OP'ed but i love it 8.5/10OP'd' date=' but I love the idea. 8/10.[/quote']I did rate. And if it means you lose 500 life points, say that please. Not "You or your opponent"...Ahem let me explain you.If you draw a spell or a trap card,you lose 500points.If your opponent draws a spell or trap card he loses 500points. exactly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huh? Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 OOOOHHH. My mistake. Sorry. +rep for mistake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 good picture. a couple of ocg errors, but other than that a great card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 5/10..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 I really do like the concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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