~Hurricane Ninja Chronicles~

[NeosWiseman]

It's not completed. I'll go on making Naruto cards(after I finish my other Set, though)

There are 2 versions of the cards. Please tell me which one you prefer.

Enjoy! ^_^

But don't forget to rate and comment as well ;-)

 

[The types are fake, but it is not supposed to be a realistic Set]

 

 

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[spoiler=[b]HNCH[/b]-BG007]

Your opponent cannot select other WIND monsters you control as an attack target. Each time this monster successfully damages your opponent, increase this card's ATK by 200 points.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]HNCH[/b]-BG008]

When this monster is Summoned, add 1 "Akamaru" from your Deck to your hand. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]HNCH[/b]-BG009]

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your "Kiba Inuzuka" as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, increase the ATK and DEF of the equipped monster by 500 points. In addition the equipped monster' name is treated as "Kiba Inuzuka & Akamaru".

 

 

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This card can only be activated while you control "Kiba Inuzuka & Akamaru" face-up on your field. Pay 500 Life Points. Destroy 2 face-down cards on the field. "Kiba Inuzuka & Akamaru" cannot declare an attack during this turn.

 

 

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This card can only be activated while you control "Kiba Inuzuka & Akamaru" face-up on your field. Pay 1000 Life Points. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF and cannot be destroyed by card effects. If you activate "Fang Over Fang", destroy 2 face-down cards and this card. This card cannot be destroyed except by it's own effect.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]HNCH[/b]-BG038]

Select 1 FIRE Attribute monster you control. Pay 300 Life Points. If the selected monster battles during this turn, the opposing monster loses 1200 ATK during the Damage Step only.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]HNCH[/b]-BG039]

Select 1 FIRE Attribute monster you control. Pay 400 Life Points. Increase the ATK of the selected monster by 300 points until the End Phase. In addition, that monster cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects.

 

 

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This card can only be activated while you control a face-up Level 6 or higher WATER monster on your field. Pay 800 Life Points. Change 1 face-up Attack Position monster your opponent controls to face-up Defense Position and inflict damage to your opponent equal to half that monster's DEF.

 

 

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This card can only be activated by selecting a face-up Level 4 or higher WATER monster on your field. Pay 600 Life Points. Select 1 non-WATER Attribute monster on your opponent's side of the field. The selected monster cannot attack and change it's battle position as long as your selected monster is face-up on the field.

 

 

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This card can only be activated while you control "Gaara of the Desert" face-up on your field. Pay 700 Life Points. Change all monsters on your opponent's side of the field to face-up Defense Position and negate their effects. In addition, add 1 "Giant Sand Burial" from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

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This card can only be activated while you control "Gaara of the Desert" face-up on your field. Pay 400 Life Points. Negate the activation of the effect of a LIGHT monster your opponent controls and destroy it.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]HNCH[/b]-BG046]

This card can only be activated while you control "Gaara of the Desert" face-up on your field. Pay 2000 Life Points. Destroy all Defense Position monsters your opponent controls. This card's effect cannot be negated or countered if your Life Points are less than 2000.

 

 

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This card can only be activated while you control "Gaara of the Desert" face-up on your field. Pay 500 Life Points to reduce the ATK of 1 monster your opponent controls by 2000 Points until the End Phase.

 

 

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This card can only be equipped to "Gaara of the Desert" you control. When the equipped monster would be destroyed by a card effect, pay 500 Life Points and it is not. This card cannot be destroyed by Spell and Trap Card effects.

 

 

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This card can only be activated while you control "Shizune" face-up on your field. Equip this card to a face-up monster you opponent controls. That monster cannot be released for an Advanced Summon. During each of your End Phases, the equipped monster has its ATK decreased by 300 points and you opponent takes 300 damage. (If the monster's ATK becomes 0, it is destroyed.)

 

 

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Select 1 face-up "Naruto Uzumaki/ Shadow Clone Mode", "Sannin Jiraiya" or "Minako Namikaze" you control. Pay 500 Life Points to increase the selected monster's ATK by 1000 points until the End Phase. If that monster destroys an opponent's monster in battle during this turn, destroy up to 2 Spell or Trap Cards on the field.

 

 

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This card can only be activated while you control "Kakashi Hatake" face-up on your field. Pay 600 Life Points. Destroy 1 non-LIGHT Attribute monster your opponent controls. If the destroyed monster has a WATER Attribute, inflict 600 damage to your opponent.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]HNCH[/b]-BG054]

Select 1 face-up "Naruto Uzumaki/ Shadow Clone Mode". Pay 900 Life Points to increase the selected monster's ATK by 800 points until the End Phase. Destroy up to 3 face-down Spell or Tarp Cards on the field.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]HNCH[/b]-BG060]

Negate the effect of a Spell, Trap or Monster Card that targets 1 "Gaara of the Desert" you control and destroy it. Then, Special Summon 1 "Sand Clone Token" (Sand/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in face-up Defense position to your side of the field.

 

 

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This card can only be activated while you control "Ten Ten" face-up on your field. Add 1 "Projectile Weapon" Spell Card from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]HNCH[/b]-BG064]

Select 1 monster on the field. Each time the controller of that monster activates a Spell Card, he/she takes 700 damage.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]HNCH[/b]-BG066]

Select 1 EARTH Attribute Bloodline-Type monster you control and a monster form your opponent's field or his/her Graveyard. The selected monster on your field is treated as the other selected monster (Name, Level, Attribute, Type, effect) as well.

 

 

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Select 1 Level 7 or higher WATER/WIND Attribute monster you control. Discard 1 card from your hand to destroy all Normal Monsters your opponent controls. The selected monster cannot attack during this turn.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]HNCH[/b]-BG069]

Select 1 WATER/WIND Attribute monster you control. Discard your hand. Inflict 700 damage to your opponent for each card discarded. The selected monster cannot attack during this turn.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]HNCH[/b]-BG070]

Select 1 WATER/WIND Attribute monster you control. Discard 1 card from your hand to destroy any face-up Field Spell Cards. In addition, until your opponent's 2nd End Phase, no monsters can declare an attack.

 

 

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[Guest BloodBlader]

cool 5 grains of sand out of 10

[NeosWiseman]

Only 5 ?!?!?!? :?

Kidding :-P

Thanks! ^_^

[Exa Raiun]

Wow, you are pretty productive! You just finished the other set, and you are already ready for a new one. Ehehe~

 

Gaara of the Desert: If this card would be Warrior-Type, it could have seen some extra support, which would make this card somewhat more useful. On its own, it's rather weak. By the way, why he is WIND? Shouldn't a sand-manipulating character be EARTH? 5/10

 

Giant Sand Burial: Use this card in conjuction with Earthquake for maximum efficiency. Interesting, if gimmicky. 6/10

 

Sand Lightning Needles: As LIGHT monsters are rather common and much-used, this card has potential to be effective. For a card which requires a monster on the field, it's pretty good. 7.5/10

 

Sand Shield: This card gives an effect to Gaara similar to the effect of Krebons, which is okay, considering the vulnerability of that card. 7/10

 

Sand Shower: I would increase the Life Point cost a bit to become more comparable to the ATK increase effect of Injection Fairy Lily. Similarly to the previous cards, it's decent. 7/10

 

Sand Tsunami: A powered-up Earthquake for a cost, but in combination with Giant Sand Burial, you pretty much got a 2-card Raigeki for 2700 Life Points. Deck thinning and enemy destruction. 5.5/10

 

Sand Clone: Effect negation, Token generator, what else you would need? Probably the best card in this set so far. 8/10

 

My opinion is that creating that many supports for a single card can cause bad draws if you are unlucky. Maybe, I am wrong.

[NeosWiseman]

Thanks, Exa Raiun! To tell you the truth, these cards are not created so much for playing than as a collection, but still I might try making them more usable.

Maybe you wonder about the whole Life Point paying. I put it because it is in some way similar to using your chakra in the Naruto anime series :-P

There will be more soon, but there is a problem. I thought that with this font used in the series the cards will look good. However, after the low rate from BloodBlader, I'm not so sure about that any more.

So I started remaking the cards with the YCM. But the Saving system is out of commission. I don't know what to do? What do you think? :?

[Exa Raiun]

Well, I noticed that these cards are more like novelty cards, sorry if my ratings are lower at times than you imagined. I am not fond of the show, but I know how to rate objectively, regardless of the series the cards are based on.

Nowadays I also had some problems involving saving the cards, I don't know why it happened. I wonder when they will repair it...

[NeosWiseman]

No, I didn't expect higher rates. I'm even amazed how high they actually are. But what about the design. I don't really like it myself... X_X

So what should I do?

...

I'll post the remakes on the YCM after i finish them (they're so hard to justify though...)

 

Edit: Oh, I forgot to tell you why Gaara is WIND Attribute. It's because he is from the Wind Country :-P

I might change him to EARTH eventually, though :D

[NeosWiseman]

BUMP, there was an update

[Exa Raiun]

Well, I forgot to take into account that he is from the Wind Country - as I said, I don't really follow the series ^^;

As for the new cards:

Fire Style: Fire Ball Technique: Similar to Rush Recklessly, but from the other way - instead of boosting up your own monster, it weakens the opponent's monster. It has a small Life Point cost, but it has a greater effect. Can be interesting in situations. 6.5/10

Fire Style: Dragon Flame Technique: Let me guess - the last effect applies until the End Phase too, right? Compared to the other version, it would have less cases where it would have been very useful, but it has its chances to shine too. 6/10

Water Style: Water Dragon Technique: There are other ways to switch monsters to Defense Position, and most monsters you would want to switch usually have too low DEF to make this card really effective, especially considering its activation requirement. 4.5/10

Water Style: Water Prison Technique: If you can keep your monster on the field for a long enough time, it can be a good way to stall your opponent in a WATER Deck. Pretty good. 7/10

[NeosWiseman]

Thanks for the review! There are a few more new cards. And there will be 5 or 6 more coming in a minute ;-)

[zancrow the flame god]

not bad, a few ocg errors here and there, but good job. 7.5/10

[NeosWiseman]

Arigatou, Shiki! ;-)

[Mothball]

Not bad not bad.

Can't really comment on OCG, as you know, but I suppose I can comment on the feasibility.

I like Cards with support cards like the Gaara card you have. But when a card relies so heavily on them... you'd need Pot/Jar of Greed or something of the like, maybe Pot of Avarice instead to recycle cards instead of self-milling yourself, or a search card or something.

I know these aren't supposed to be realistic, but I still look at playability

[NeosWiseman]

I totally understand you! Thanks! ^^

[Exa Raiun]

Wow, quite a massive of number of cards you came up with in such a short time, ehehe~

 

Kiba Inuzuka: For a Level 3 monster, he is pretty okay. A decent ATK and ability for his level. 7/10

 

Akamaru: Having a fake Type really hurts this card. If this would be Beast-Type, it could be easier to Summon and use. Otherwise, it fits to the concept. 5/10, it would be 7/10 as Beast-Type.

 

Fang Over Fang: Considering the activation requirements, it's balanced enough and effective. The Life Point cost could be a little higher, though. 7.5/10

 

Combination Transformation Double Headed Wolf: I believe the first effect should be "This card can be equipped to a face-up "Kiba Inuzuka & Akamaru" you control." The way you worded it would allow to equip to another monster if you have the mentioned card on the field. The effect is pretty nice, on the other hand, the way it gets destroyed when you use "Fang Over Fang" makes it somewhat weaker. 7/10

 

Poison Fog: A much slower version of Venom Counter-based decks - which is already a suboptimal concept - with a very minor effect damage. I'm not that impressed by that card, honestly. Even the Tribute restriction doesn't help much on it. 4/10

 

Rasengan: You really like these Spell / Trap destruction methods, right? This one seems effective - maybe a bit too much - for its cost and boost. Probably I would make it Semi-Limited. 6.5/10

 

Lightning Blade: Kind of a simple effect supported by a low situational effect damage. Not my cup of tea. 5/10

 

Great Ball Rasengan: More Spell / Trap destruction. Seriously. With a few of your cards you can clear whole fields. Rasengan was okay, as it needed the destruction of a monster your opponent controls (even though I don't know the reuqired monster's base ATK), but you can just spam it to clear the field. 4/10

 

Ninja Art: Projectile Preparation Scrolls: I cannot judge it without the Projectile Weapon cards. I admit I expected something related to Equip Spell Cards from this card ^^'

 

Chakra Control Device: An inverted and weakened version of Spell Absorption, but it needs keeping a monster of your opponent on the field. In stalling deck, it may have some use. If it wouldn't be for the "controller of card" part, it would have more use. 6/10, would be 7.5/10 if changed.

 

Face-Copying Technique: As I did not see enough "Bloodline-Type" monsters from your set, I again cannot rate properly - it has the chance to become balanced or broken.

 

Ice Style : Black Dragon Blizzard: For its activation requirement, it's really weak. Normal Monsters are not really used nowadays. 4/10, 7/10 against a Normal Monster deck.

 

Ice Style: Wolfgang Avalanche: This effect is the same as Full Salvo, you just added an activation requirement and increased the damage by a lot - 700 / card instead of 200 / card. I am not sure what to say about this... 5.5/10

 

Ice Style: White Whale Technique: Field Spell destruction and the effect of Nightmare's Steelcage in one card? Curious, I wonder how it would work... 6/10

 

I feel that many of these new cards lack something in creativity or balance. But that's only my opinion...

[NeosWiseman]

I'm making the cards the way I feel them, the way I see them in the anime. That's my problem...

 

Thank you for the comment! ^_^

[Exa Raiun]

Flavor-consistency is actually a great thing when you create a Pop Culture card. I know it can be really difficult to make cards which are creative, balanced and fit to the original characters, attacks, etc. That's why I don't make a lot of Pop Culture cards nowadays. Your dedication to your sets is wonderful, and even though they have their errors, I can really appreciate your work with them. Keep up the good work!

[NeosWiseman]

I will sure do! Thank you!

 

Comment some more guys! ^_^