Forgotten Set 7/???:Dark bonds added with a tohou pic XD

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Added spell with tohou pic FTW

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Maybe I'll go hump bump bump

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[Guest Dark-Azkrin666]

nice cards a few OCG errors but thats fine My fav. would be "Eternal Guirdian" that gets a 9.5/10 everything else gets a 8.9/10 overall nice work ^^

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I would like to know atleast some of the OCG errors...

 

But thankyou

[Goldbacon98]

Nice cards but next time don't use those manga girls in those positions. Someone might report it.

 

9/10

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First I was like ...

 

And then I lol'd

 

I'm pretty sure only a idiot would report this...

Also nothing wrong with positions,not really thinking like you

Sorry these are not any manga girls XD

 

Oh well thanks for your comment

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Zexcro

This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 1 DARK and 1 FIRE monster you control. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, this card gains 100 ATK and you can remove from play 1 LIGHT monster in your opponent's Graveyard. During each of your End Phases, lose 200 Life Points.

 

The original effect was just so overpowered. If this thing destroyed a monster (not having to inflict battle damage), you RFP nuked your opponent's Graveyard. That's fine if they were using "Blackwings", but a lot of Decks use at least a couple of LIGHT staples, and RFPing them in one go is just broken.

 

The ATK gain, I presume, was supposed to be 'This card gains ATK equal to the destroyed monster's Level x 100', and that too is overpowered on a Level that starts with 2500 ATK. All ATK-gaining cards start with low ATK and work their way up.

 

I'd put a Special Summoning condition and increase the burn.

 

 

Transformation into Forgotten

Pay 500 Life Points and Tribute 1 monster you control. Special Summon 1 Forgotten-Type monster from your Deck in face-up Attack Position whose Level is lower than the Tributed monster's.

 

I think it's overpowered. This is instant Deck-searching at a relatively low cost. I would have it either returned after a turn or destroyed after a pair, OR not allow it to be used in a Summon.

 

The name is also a bit heavy.

 

 

Kiria

When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Position. Its effect is negated.

 

Basically a Level 4 version of "Junk Synchron" and "Black Salvo". Instant set-up for a Synchro Summon. At least it has low stats.

 

 

Lucy

Once per turn, select 1 face-up Level 4 or lower monster your opponent controls. Switch control of the selected monster, until the End Phase. The selected monster cannot attack or be Tributed and its original ATK and DEF become 0. You cannot Synchro Summon during the turn this effect is used.

 

Last part added to prevent you from using the hijacked monster as Synchro fodder.

 

 

Eternal Guardian

Activate only when your opponent's monster targets a monster you control. Negate the attack. The selected monster cannot attack or change its battle position. When it is removed from the field, send this card to the Graveyard. When this card is destroyed, both players select 1 monster they control. Destroy all monsters except the selected monsters.

 

Effect changed heavily because completely locking down your opponent's monster and then stopping your opponent from getting rid of it themselves is far too strong without a counter-balance. Plus, this card is similar to other, already existing lock cards.

 

 

Tenshi

This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. You can only Summon this card while you have 3000 or less Life Points. During each of your Standby Phases, discard 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your hand. Gain Life Points equal to the discarded monster's Level x 100. If you cannot, destroy this card.

 

Unlike all the other cards here, this is quite underpowered. If you have 3000 LP, you'll want something that can turn the game around. With this, you get 1800 ATK (Level 4 Normals can out-gun it) and a constant discard cost, with no real gain. Increase the ATK to 2200.

 

 

Dark Bond

 

Instant Deck-searching of DARK monsters with no restriction of Summoning and the pair protect each other. Just how broken did you want this to be? Instant searching of "Red-Eyes" to either Tribute for "R-E Darkness" or RFP for "R-E Darkness Metal", any DARK monster that can be Special Summoned, and instant swarming power for "Ally of Justice" Decks.

 

Rethink it completely.

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Wow...lol nice post so I give you props on that...

 

I'll fix this later probably when less lazy...maybe

 

Still really impressed to see a post like this.

 

Ya I usally end up making oped cards.

Oh well I find some cards good just the way they are but I still might consider to change it

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[wolfman505]

This is good 8.5/10