Mecha's Cards

[Rosuke]

The most Creative Effect is In The Final Please Comment an Rate ^^ enjoy

 

 

LoreEach time this card Attacks you may Perform 1 of the next Effects :

-Pay 2000 life points.

-Discard 3 cards from your hand.

 

 

Lore:Each time a monster with ``Mecha`` in its Name is destroyed put 1 ``Destroyer counter`` (Max 3) on this card Tribute 3``Destroyer counter`` on this Card to Destroy 3 cards in your Opponent Side of the Field , in the End turn you use this effect Destroy this Card.

 

 

Lore:During your Opponent Battle Phase Summon in your Field 1 ``Spacenoid token`` lvl 3/0 Atk/0 Def/Dark Atribute/Machine This Token can be not offered for Tribute .

 

 

 

 

 

Photo from DevianART Creator:Kujo

 

The Best One :D

Lore:This Card is not Affected by Spells or Trap and Can't ve Changed of Position Every Time This Card Destroys a Monster by Battle Increase it Attack by 300 When This Card is Destroyed The Monster who Destroyed this Card is Destroyed , When This Card is Sended by battle to your Graveyard you Lose 1000 life points .

 

 

Ty For See ^^

[cruelnoob200]

CETR--there is no "perform" there is "execute" though...

FML-- a bit too much capitalization "opponent's", "Counter (capitalized) "NOTE:Change the name... FML means "F*** My Life"

Scapenoid Mechas--"Token" is capitalized

JEM--lots of OCG cant fix... change pic

MLL--"This card Make Piercing Damage"? how bout "When this card attacks an opponent's monster whose DEF if lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference in Battle Damage to your opponent."

BSM-you need to learn ENGLISH

 

Overall: i thought that these were very well thought out cards but i dont see any strategy between them. The pics need to be colored or changed and there are LOTS of OCG errors

5.5/10

[Alcander]

A lot of OCG errors, pictures are bad (only 1st is good)

 

correct OCG:

[spoiler=1st Card]

When this card declare an attack, activate 1 of the following effects:

-Pay 2000 Life Points.

-Discard 3 cards from your hand..

Also drop it's DEF to something like 1000-1500.

 

 

[spoiler=2nd Card]

Each time a "Mecha" monster you control is destroyed by battle put 1 "Destroyer Counter" on this card (Max. 3). During your Main Phas (change it if you want) you can remove 3 "Destroyer Counters" on this card to destroy 3 cards your opponent controls, then destroy this card.

 

 

[spoiler=3th Card]

Actually I don't see use in this card though.

 

During your opponent's Battle Phase you can Special Summon 1 "Spacenoid Token" (Machine-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 0). That Token cannot be Tributed.

 

 

[spoiler=4th Card]

You can only activate this card when your opponent declares a direct attack. Special Summon 1 "Mecha" monster from your Graveyard by paying x400 Life Points equal it's card Level. (not sure about this correction)

 

 

[spoiler=5th Card]

This card inflicts Piercing Damage.

 

Bland Effect.

 

 

[spoiler=6th Card]

This card is unaffected by Spell or Trap Cards. This card gains 300 ATK for each monster destroyed by this card. When this card is destroyed by a monster your opponent controls destroy that monster and you lose 1000 Life Points.

 

 

Well some of them UP'ed (underpowered) some are balanced just 1st it's OP'ed IMO. You need a lot of improvement tough.

 

6/10

[GeroKeymaster]

The OCG is aweful, but I'm guessing from the grammar that English isn't your first language, so I won't beat you up too much about it. The first monster, "CETR-XV", needs to be changed to say that you "must" not that you "may", otherwise it seems like you don't have to pay the penalty for attacking if you don't want to. As Cruelnoob pointed out, while "pierce" may be the common term used for the effect you gave "MLL-MN", the effect on the card should always be written as, "When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your opponent's Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points." The magic card, "Spacenoid Mecha", needs to say what battle position the token is summoned in (or say that you choose the position, if that's what you wanted). Overall, not too bad of effects, but "CETR-XV" seems like it may be under-powered. Maybe change the LP loss to a lower number, and make the discard less cards. 5/10