tyrentjames Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Sorry if the name is mis-spelledHope you like it!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwarg1 Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 alot of ocg errors... dnt like pic because its a character off of a video game.. 5/10...if u change the pic and fix ocg it should get a better rating... but dont let the bad rating discourage you,, let it encourage u to become a better cardmaker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Your new, so let me explain some things:- 3600 ATK / 3200 DEF is too much- Level 9? Lets make it a max of 8- Do not make it a divine if its not a God... please...- Spacing, Capitilization, Grammar errors are all over the place.- The name is just, like a bad teenage-mutant-ninja-turtle foe. I'm not a fan of this card. 3/10. ): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyrentjames Posted May 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 what is an ocg error?lol wow alittle mean dont you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 This card cannot Attack your opponent directly. When this card battles, card effects (except for this card) cannot be activated until the End Phase. This card gains ATK equal to its Level x100 during the Battle Phase only. Change the "This card's Level" to "The Level of your opponent's Monster" instead. That balances it out a little more (even tho this card is way too OP'd to matter). I think this card needs a cost. Like Tributing 3 monsters you control.An OCG error is an error in the effect/lore of a card. Like what you have here. No, they weren't being mean, they were doing what had to do. Get used to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosuke Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 tyrentjames what is an ocg error? Oficial Card Grammar i think Example : Magic is bad OCG Spell is Good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyrentjames Posted May 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 okay i understand what about this card then...any mistakes jus point them out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Please, don't use that sort of rarity w/ a Synchro. It strains my(/our) eyes too much. White on white just doesn't mix. "winged-beast" should be "Winged Beast" LORE: Destroy this card during your opponent's 3rd End Phase after this card is summoned. This card gains 200 ATK for each "Blessed Angel" monster in your Graveyard. This card is not effected by your opponent's Spell Cards. There you go. It is just something you have to get used to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Please add lore if there aren't any more spaces left in effect/description box, even if you don't know how to spoiler tag (I don't >_>). Either way, you should make the level adding ATK during your own Battle Phase... Actually, I think you should get rid of it altogether. 5/10 + 1/10 for one of your first cards (not sure, just guessing because of your card count). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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