My best zombie type monsters

[Coaster Guy]

 

 

 

 

 

 

LORE:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing a face-up Shadow Ghoul on your side of the field. This card's ATK is increased by 1000

for each Zombie-Type monster on both player's graveyards. You must pay 1000 Life Points to attack with this card, to attack directly with this card, you must pay 2500 Life Points.

 

 

 

 

 

 

LORE:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.

This card can only be Special Summoned by Removing from Play 1 "Celtic Guardian" and 1 DARK type monster with 2000 or more attack points from your Side of the Field. This card can attack again for each card with the word "Zombie" or "Guardian" on the field.

[~Shin~]

[spoiler=FIX]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 "Shadow Ghoul" you control. Increase the ATK of this card by 1000 points for each Zombie-Type monster in both player's Graveyard. You must pay 1000 Life Points to attack with this card. You must pay 2500 Life Points to attack directly with this card.

 

why "Shadow Ghoul" ?! this is a skeleton and "Shadow Ghoul".. is a ghoul.

level 10 is too high.. I think 5 will be much better.

1800 + about 5000-10000 = 6800-11800 alot of ATK.

the player have to pay so much life point make it less power to pay less points.

my rate 4.5/10.

I am tired, so I will rate your second card ASAP.

[Anti-Apocryphal]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.

This card can only be Special Summoned by Removing from Play 1 "Celtic Guardian" and 1 DARK type monster with 2000 or more attack points from your Side of the Field. This card can

attack again for each card with the word "Zombie" or "Guardian" on the field.

 

 

Everythng seems OK except the "Side of the Field" Side should be lower case.

OCG- 8/10

Pics-5/10

Overall-13/20