New Spirit monsters

[Evolution1988]

So I always like the concept behind Spirit monsters... their effectiveness is another story, but the concept was cool... so I made some....

 

My OCG needs some work, so help me out please. BTW can someone tell me how to get my posts to have the "Lore" tag... been wondering about that.

 

 

Gentou Oni: Fiend / Spirit 1400 atk 900 def

-This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or flipped face-up. When this Card destroys a Monster inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed Monster's original attack.

 

 

Ethereal Dragon: Dragon / Spirit 800atk 300 def

-This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or flipped face-up. When this card is Normal Summoned, both players return one card on the Field to their hand.

 

 

Forgot to edit the effect on the card... it currently shows the same effect as Ethereal Dragon... but I just haven't gotten around to editing the actual card yet... :P

 

Sky Huntress Atalanta: Fairy / Spirit 1600 atk 1100 def

-This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or flipped face-up. When this Card declares an attack, you can change the battle position of the face-up defending Monster.

[MibeR]

Card=card

face-up defending=face-up Defense Position

 

8/10,

keep working make a card.

 

i make a monter with that oni too

[LourDeath]

the picture on the first card has a copyright

change that

[Jolta]

I do mind Spirit Monsters without Japish names lol.

 

First kard reminds me of Flaem Wingman.

 

Yokaism.

 

Dragon dude is sumwut a more time-wasting version of Brionac, but for some reason it won't be banned. Its somewhat like another Yokai called "Red Ogre".

 

Last pic is HAWT. Plus it actually benefits us. Fun with Ojamas.

9/10

[SgtExell]

U mean like this? [spoiler=Lore]Effect of a card in here you mean right?

Use [spoiler=Lore](then paste effect in the middle and close the spoiler using)[spoiler}<--- note that this bracket is different so you could see ther code otherwise it wud have done actually done the spoiler and you wouldnt be able to see what it is. Use the brackets []

 

Anyway the cards, good effect and pics, solid 7/10. Minor OCG errors.

 

When this Card destroys a Monster inflict Battle damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the destroyed Monster's original attack.

[Evolution1988]

Thanks a lot guys, appreciate the feedback.

 

Mahandra: Thanks for the help with the OCG.

 

Lourdeath: I personally know the artist, the copyright is not an issue.

 

Jolta: yeah that last pic is pretty hot :P

 

SgtExell: Thanks a lot man, couldn't figure that out... had some bad feedback on a previous thread for not posting the lore, so i just want to make sure I get it right. Like I said, OCG is still something i'm working on.

 

Thanks again for the feedback.

[LourDeath]

Thanks a lot guys' date=' appreciate the feedback.

 

Mahandra: Thanks for the help with the OCG.

 

Lourdeath: I personally know the artist, the copyright is not an issue.

 

Jolta: yeah that last pic is pretty hot :P

 

SgtExell: Thanks a lot man, couldn't figure that out... had some bad feedback on a previous thread for not posting the lore, so i just want to make sure I get it right. Like I said, OCG is still something i'm working on.

 

Thanks again for the feedback.

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that would be nice