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I now have my permission so here are the cards.

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[spoiler=Effect Cards]494664.jpg494664pd.jpg494664.jpg494664.jpg494664s.jpg494664j.jpg494664.jpg494664x.jpg494664.jpg494664o.jpg494664.jpg494664a.jpg494664oa.jpg494664y.jpg494664g.jpg494664.jpg494664.jpg494664w.jpg494664m.jpg494664u.jpg494664.jpg494664j.jpg494664b.jpg494664b.jpg494664e.jpgLore:This card cannot be normal summoned or flip summoned. This card cannot be special summoned except by Tributing a Dragon-Type monster with "Elder" in its name. When this card is tribute summoned successfully increase your Life-Points by the amount of Magic/Trap cards on the field x200. Send one monster from your hand to the graveyard to destroy one monster on the field. This monster cannot attack the same turn this effect is used.494664.jpg494664u.jpg494664.jpg494664p.jpg207253.jpg207253.jpg

 

 

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494664t.jpg Lore:1 tuner monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters. When this card is summoned increase your life points by the amount of cards in your opponents hand x100. When there is one or more Dragon-Type monsters on the field this card cannot be the target of an opponents attack. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle inflict damage to your opponents life points equal to half the attack of the attacking monster. If this card is destroyed by a magic or trap card this card is special summoned back to the field at the end phase of your turn.

494664.jpgLore:1 tuner monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters. When summoned the owner of this card draw 5 cards from their deck if any of the drawn cards is a monster summon them to the field disregarding summoning conditions, than discard the remaining cards to the graveyard. If this card is attacked by a Beast-Type or Warrior-Type monster the monster is destroyed at the end phase of the same turn.494664.jpgLore:1 tuner monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters. When another dragon Synchro is on the field increase the attack of this card by the level of that card x100 and increase this cards defense by the level of the card x200. If your opponent has deal damage to your opponents life points equal to the amount of cards in both players graveyards x50. When this card is removed from the field special summon it to the field during the end phase.

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[spoiler=Others Monsters]

494664t.jpg Lore:1 tuner monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters. When this card is summoned increase your life points by the amount of cards in your opponents hand x100. When there is one or more Dragon-Type monsters on the field this card cannot be the target of an opponents attack. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle inflict damage to your opponents life points equal to half the attack of the attacking monster. If this card is destroyed by a magic or trap card this card is special summoned back to the field at the end phase of your turn.

494664.jpgLore:1 tuner monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters. When summoned the owner of this card draw 5 cards from their deck if any of the drawn cards is a monster summon them to the field disregarding summoning conditions, than discard the remaining cards to the graveyard. If this card is attacked by a Beast-Type or Warrior-Type monster the monster is destroyed at the end phase of the same turn.

494664.jpgLore:1 tuner monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters. When another dragon Synchro is on the field increase the attack of this card by the level of that card x100 and increase this cards defense by the level of the card x200. If your opponent has deal damage to your opponents life points equal to the amount of cards in both players graveyards x50. When this card is removed from the field special summon it to the field during the end phase.494664z.jpg494664.jpg494664k.jpg

 

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ShadowDragon666 Newbie

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1st y did u put these in pop culture cards? 2nd if Oracle dragon has 3000 atk y does it have 12 stars? 3rd dragon of the shadows pic is a bit overused.4th Were did u get your pics they r kinda awsome.

dragons furry is spelled rong its fury

just a tip ycm people dont like it much wen you put divine attribute.

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"Dragon's Furry" Ya might wanna fix that one. LMAO XD

On top of that, these aren't very creative. The first 4 are the same, there's a complete lack of basic "yugioh grammar," and generally, cards that would be considered a "set" should have more in common.

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Hey nice cards' date=' 8/10. Small fix needed on either your ritual monster or your ritual spell because one says lvl 6 the other lvl 12. Would like to see more

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Alright i fixed.

More Dragons, Golden Dragon, Ruby Dragon, Sapphire Dragon, Topaz dragon, Emerald Dragon, Jasper Dragon.

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Hey, I have my own Dragon set, you should check it out if you need some ideas for future cards. Anyway, a couple of small ocg (Offical Card Grammer) problems.

 

First, your Sea card, should read something like "While there is another WATER monster on the Field, this card cannot be chosen as an attack target." It doesn't have to be that, but it is the simplist way to put your stated effect.

 

Next, your Shadow card. "This monster may attack twice per Battle phase, if your Opponent controls a LIGHT monster."

 

For Renuion and Fury, the only problem is it should be Dragon-Type not Dragon type.

 

For Golden, " For each Dragon card in your Opponent's Hand and Graveyard, this card increases by 200 ATK, and decreases by 100 DEF."

 

 

Finally, Jasper. The only defference is attack to ATK and defence to DEF.

 

Now, these comments aren't ment to be over critical or make you look bad, but to show you where you can improve. I've gone through it, I'm sure every person on this site has. So please don't take them the wrong way. The only reason I bothered commenting was because I want to see more at the best of your ability. Also, you are in no way obligated to change your cards due to this, it is just friendly advice that honestly got a little nit-picky but is still valid.

 

Sorry about the ramble above. Keep up the good work. To make up for you having to read through that blob of thought above, I'll say this. Try using spoiler tags.

 

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Your card images copy pasted

 

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Just remove the four spaces and they will work

 

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Your card images copy pasted

 

 

 

 

Hope you found this helpful.

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Vediavis Newbie

Vediavis

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New cards:

Crystal Dragon, dragon Warrior, Rainbow Dragon, The fury of the golden dragon, Topaz charm, Sapphire charm, ruby charm, emerald charm, and Jasper charm.

Vediavis the oracle dragon pic was already being used by me but otherwise you have a very good dragon deck.

 

yea its a pretty common pic, but once i find a better one i'll change it

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Nice new cards. When I saw all your crystal dragons, I had deja vue. Click the link below and look under Gem Dragons.

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-195732.html

 

I like your take on them though, with the charms.

 

Alright, on to your new cards. As of now, i only see two problems in your monster cards, one on each of the new ones.

 

For Crystal, the "This card gains 200 ATK points for each dragon on the field." Okay, first, you don't need to say points, by putting ATK it is not needed, next, Field needs caps. Finally, the dragon. This may be on purpose but as of now, you are saying for each card with dragon in its name on the field, instead of each Dragon-Type monster on the field. Either way, the way you have it is right but only for the first bit of the statement. The difference is not big, but you will get Dragon-Type monster who do not have dragon in their name, and you will get other cards with dragon in their name like your magic cards, or your Dragon Warrior. As I said, this does not need changed if it is the effect you wanted, heck you could even put in both. "This card gains 200 ATK for each dragon card and Dragon-Type monster on the Field."

 

Your Dragon Warrior is actually almost perfect grammer wise. A few small changes neede, and the same effect problem as above. First, drop the points from the end of the first effect. Then, a possible wording for the second effect goes, "For each dragon or Dragon-Type monster destroyed by this card, increase this monster by 500 ATK."

 

Okay, on a quality note, this card is way over powered for a lvl 2. This is beause it could hit 2000+ by your fourth turn if you run a dragon deck. As such, I recomend increasing its lvl to 5 and increasing its base ATK to 1000. thus, two dragons in the graveyard and you have a 2000 ATK monster which could quickly increase. Also, I would add a cap, like "This card cannot gain more than 4000 ATK." That's 8 dragons in the graveyard, very easy to do.

 

Alright, your first Trap. Nothing major wrong, just the last couple words, replace attack points with ATK and it will be fine.

 

Finally, all your charms are fine exept how the effect is worded, as is, if you have three emerald dragons on the field, and equip one, all three would get the effect. So with all of them, I would change it to something like "The equipe monster cannot be chosen as an attack target while this card is on the Field."

 

So, I like the new cards. I would like to see some cards with synergy. What this means is cards with effects that are similar, work together, complient each other, and lower the downsides of some effects. In otherwords cards that fit with one another and would work well in a deck format.

 

9/10 on the new stuff.

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Alright thanks for the input, i thought that the dragon warrior might not have enough stars but was unsure. i will try to make some cards that work together as you posted.

New Cards:

Oak Dragon, Forest Dragon, dragons dance, and Run away.

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