dme14 Posted May 13, 2010 Report Share Posted May 13, 2010 Lore:Once per turn if your opponent declares an attack, then you may negate the attack. If you activate this effect, half the attack of one of your opponents monsters, and deal 1000 damage to your opponent. If this card declares an attack then your opponent gets a "Construct Token" in their Spell/Trap card zone and puts 1 "Construct Counter" on it (Max 3). Your opponent may discard their "Construct Token" with 3 "Construct Counters" on it to deal 4000 Damage to you. This is my first card and I would like it if someone could help me with correcting the ocg and rate it. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted May 13, 2010 Report Share Posted May 13, 2010 A few OCG errors I can see. Idk much about OCG so I can't fix it for you. Interesting concept. 7/10. I'd give it a 8 or 9 but the OCG needs a bit of work. And I'm pretty sure you can only make tokens appear on the monster card zones. Unless your trying to do something new here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dme14 Posted May 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2010 Thanks :D, yes I was trying to be creative with the spell card zone. I'm trying to work on my ocg in the next cards im making, but i have to study it first. Thank you for the rating. Any others? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dme14 Posted May 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2010 Comments, Ratings plz? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dme14 Posted May 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2010 bump...Is anybody going to post? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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