The Dark Ages Set

[Daigusto Sphreez]

This is my first set and I have used only my own inspiration for this set (along with other peoples pictures :P, with the exception of rainbow archer, I edited it). The cards don't relate with each other to heavily and the effects aren't anything special. But given I'm new to this any constructive criticism is welcome. I rate myself at about 4/10, I'm sure I'll climb up the ladder as I make more. Anyway, here it is:

 

 

 

 

Part 1:

 

 

Part 2:

 

 

 

Part 3:

 

 

Limited Edition Bonus Card:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh and if you wondering why I have this many cards on such a new account, it is because I made most of them under the account name 'Thermal' However I couldn't get an activation email on that account so I made this one instead.

 

I know I'm a bit thin on the ground as far as spells and traps go but I plan on adding a few more things, I know this is the finished sets section but it is 90% there so yeah... :)

[Phantm-Trashcan]

Actualy. some real sick cards. the pics are cool. one is a bit explicit lol.

cool concept, but maybe a lil OP

[Daigusto Sphreez]

Thanks, I agree that some cards seem overpowered (such as the unicorns) but they are pretty difficult to summon so the lack of reliability compensates a little I think. =P

[Daigusto Sphreez]

I haven't sold it very well but please look, I wouldn't have posted them if I thought they were that bad...

 

Comments are handy so I can improve.

[Psycholera]

I could help you with OCG, but there are a lot of cards...

 

I'll do the first two...

 

1: This monster can only attack DARK, FIRE, WATER or EARTH monsters. If this monster destroys an EARTH monster, your opponent misses their next Battle Phase.

 

2:This card can only be activated if you control a face-up "Humanoid Minotaur". Destroy any LIGHT or WIND monsters that attack a "Humanoid Minotaur" card you control, then attach this card as an Equip Spell Card to "Humanoid Minotaur". The equipped monster can also attack WIND and LIGHT monsters.

 

 

Bear in mind that no LIGHT or WIND monster will attack Humanoid Minotaur as they can see this card. I would recommend making this a Counter Spell Card which is only activated when a LIGHT or WIND monster attacks a Humanoid Minotaur. This would make the OCG go something like:

 

Activate this card only when a face-up "Humanoid Minotaur" you control is attacked by a LIGHT or WIND monster. Destroy the attacking monster and equip this card to a "Humanoid Minotaur" you control. The equipped monster can now also attack LIGHT and WIND monsters.

 

I'm not too sure - my OCG's not great...

[Daigusto Sphreez]

Thanks for help, I know my OCG is pretty bad but I recently found the OCG grammar thread, hopefully that will make my future OCG better.

 

Although the set wasn't really an effort to be accurate with the OCG, provided it makes sense and looks good enough but I guess OCG gives it the authenticity.

[xxXxxtremnity]

They're actually pretty decent, I'd give it a 8.5/10

[SirtyStan]

I do have some constructive critisism for you... But first, my rate: 3/10.

The cards are okay, but I don't think that Konami would ever publish them, because of the pictures (Part 2).

If you look at an actual card, instead of "wind attributed monster" it just says "WIND monster". Also, in some cards, they put "1st Edition" and in all the rest, they leave it blank, except for the "LIMITED EDITION" cards. Whereas you put the cards rarity.

Also, where you put numbers on the left side of the card (showing the pack name) you should put something like "DKAG-XXX" where "X" is the card number.

Finally, instead of "costs your opponent X00 life points." where "X" is the number of points, you should put "inflict X00 life points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points."

One more thing... Some minor OCG errors... Like you're supposed to capitalize stuff like "Normal Summoned","Special Summoned","Direct Damage", and "Life Points".