Dragon's Kingdom

[OsA Tim]

This is my attempt at cards....my first cards and begining of a set.

They have no pictures cause i suck with graphics.

The attack of this monster is determined by equiping one dragon type monster from your hand, deck,or graveyard to this card and take the dragon type card's ATK points and add 500 ATK Points.If the dragon type card is choosen from your deck or graveyard you must pay 500 LP. The dragon can not be destoryed by card effects.You must choose to pay 200 LP for every level the choosen dragon has every end phase, if you choose not to pay this card is shifted to defense mode and the dragon is moved out of play.When this card is destroyed move this card to the graveyard and remove the dragon from play.

This card must be the target of all oppenents attacks.

A young boy training to be a Dragon's Knight.

This card can only be summoned using "Dragon's Training." Flip a coin and call it. If called correctly imediately sacrifice this card to summon one "Dragon's Knight" from you hand or deck. If called incorrectly pay 1000 LP.

This card can only be summoned by using "Dragon's Squire"'s effect. This card can direct attack your oppoent if he/she has no monsters in attack position.

Sacrifice one "Dragon's Page" to summon one "Dragon's Squire."

"Dragon's Knight" + "Dragon's Rider"

This fusion only works if "Dragon's Knight" is on the field. This card can battle face-down monsters with out activating Flip effects.

Increase the ATK of all "Dragon's Kingdom" cards by 200. All LP cost for "Dragon's Kingdom" cards are cancel out. Must pay 1000 LP every Standby Phase or this card is destroyed.

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Please give advice on these cards and the rest of set.

[T3RA PROWL3R]

Welcome to YCM.

 

[spoiler=Recommended Websites for pictures]

Jazin Kay's Photobucket Album

DeviantArt

Random Art Showcases on YCM

 

 

Please tell me if there is anything I missed.

 

 

Since they don't have pics, just post them in Written Cards. I get that you want them in here so they would get more attention and all, but this is technically "against the rules".

 

There are no "Dragon's Kingdom" cards. Just "Dragon's" cards.

 

I see no point in correcting the OCG, as with these cards, I don't see much of a future.

 

4/10. Sorry.

 

Oh yeah, also noticed that your 1st post on this website was a Set. Good Job.

[OsA Tim]

Thanks i didn't know sum you said and i came up with these all in basically an hour...didn't think they were really good just mediocore but any advice on how to make better cards??

[T3RA PROWL3R]

- Make the effects bigger. People don't find small effects interesting (most of the time).

 

- Look at other people's threads and get ideas of what kind of cards you want to make, but try not to steal an idea.

 

- A few questions you can ask yourself is:

"Is this card balanced?"

* "Once per turn, you can destroy 1 card on the field"

* "When this card is selected as an Attack target, negate the Attack and remove this card from play for the remainder of the duel.

"Does this card have good synergy with other cards?" (Does it work well with other cards)

"Is this card diverse?" (Does it have multiple effects)

 

- Is this card impressionable?

 

- Does this card have good OCG (Look at OCG guide for tips ~ OCG is Official Card Grammer)

 

 

I'm sure there are things I've missed. This should give you an idea of your goal on YCM.