Lucky Fairy..my first card..

[Kitori]

Lore: If this card is face-up Defense Position during your Standby Phase, choose any number of cards from your hand and shuffle them into your deck. After, increase ATK of this card by the same number of cards shuffled in x200. If this card is destroyed by Fiend-Type monster and sent to the Graveyard, gain 1000 your Life Points and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of that monster x 200.

 

 

 

Please: Rate and comment..thanks ^^

[GeroKeymaster]

OCG (Official Card Game) fix: "During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Defense Position, you may choose any number of cards in your Hand and shuffle them into your Deck. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for each card returned to the Deck by this effect. If this card is destroyed by Battle by a Fiend-type monster, increase your Life Points by 1000, and decrease you Opponent's Life Points by the LVL of the monster x 200."

 

The DEF is a little high, maybe make it 2000? Aside from that, not bad for your first card, and great picture. 8/10

[zzuxon]

THAT IS GOOD for a first card.8/10

[Kitori]

thanks all ^^