Ghoulish Posted May 16, 2010 Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 I cant beleive i have to write this stuff again, "as usual dont just write "ocg errors" or "this effect isnt good", if tehre are erors or u dont like a certain thing then specify why, "CONSTRUCTIVE" critisicm accepted". comment and rate When a Dragon-Type monster you control destroys a monster your opponent controls by battle activate this card. The destroyed monster is removed from play and your opponent takes damage equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. During each of your opponent's Standby Phases, your opponent gains 300 Life Points until the damage they previously took is gained. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted May 16, 2010 Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 I see what you tried to do with the LP regain, since it would be fairly op'ed if you didn't getting to remove the monster and inflict Equalizer damage, but maybe instead of increasing their life points I would go with paying your own LP instead, and the wording is mostly right, I just think it's backward, this is how I would write it (you don't have to listen to me, this is just a suggestion) You can activate this card when a Dragon-Type monster you control destroys an opponent's monster by battle. Pay 1000 Life Points to remove from play and inflict damage equal to the destroyed monsters ATK.The destroyed monster is removed from play and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. Hope this helps, I give it an 8.5, and this would be best in a Burn Dragon deck in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitori Posted May 16, 2010 Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 not bad..8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dries965 Posted May 16, 2010 Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 Shouldnt this card be quickplay? Because the moment and place you activate it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted May 16, 2010 Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 Nah, I think that it's best as a normal trap, cause quickplays would never work for an effect like this, it has to be done during the battle phase of the opponent and it doesn't affect the monsters, just what happens to them, for example "Shrink" will lower their attack or "Book of Moon" will switch them face-down, but no quick play is used to destroy an opponent's monster when they attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 thx for the comment jz, i actually agree with u but ill think bout it its a good suggestion though, oh and btw are thre even quiik play trap cards?? Theres only quik play spells arent there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valliant12 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 thx for the comment jz' date=' i actually agree with u but ill think bout it its a good suggestion though, oh and btw are thre even quiik play trap cards?? Theres only quik play spells arent there[/quote'] Yes there are indeed quickplay traps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 wow didnt expect a comment on this card posed it agesss ago and nahh there arent any quick play traps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 i think the correct OCG fix is:You can only activate this card when a Dragon-Type monster you control destroys a monster by battle. thats for the first sentence anywayother than that pretty good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 lol yea i posted it a couple of months ago and it recently got a comment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 yeah i got that once on 1 thread of mine like a month ago Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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