ProSora Posted May 16, 2010 Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 well here it is =D hope you like it, i did a lot of things for the first time in this sig....... and i hope you likeand i want to add text, does anyone have ideas? v1 v2 ~CnC~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted May 16, 2010 Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 http://i640.photobucket.com/albums/uu122/jebaidia1/newsiggy.png That's your best work. Work on your lighting and concept. Then work on your execution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PowerlinX Posted May 16, 2010 Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 Like I said on HD, the render is SEXY! but you need to work on flow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted May 17, 2010 Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 Looks more like a stock. Lighting is pretty bad, as well as depth, pen tooling is looking pretty good, but you should work on adding more effects, to incorporate with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 17, 2010 Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 Who exactly were you trying to fool? Anyone with eyes could tell this is absolutely an abysmal attempt at graphical arts. I took the liberty of BURN-ing the image to show you all my suspicions. Look;[align=center]Green = Real Light Source.Red = Artificial Light Source.Purple = Fractal/C4D Whoring you tried to cover up.[/align]And because what you did here was so terribly wtf, I felt compelled to show everyone how many mistakes you made here.[align=center]The spots are where you just screwed up. Granted, compared to yours it doesn't look THAT bad, but again as I said. Anyone with an eye for detail would have seen this.[/align] So... What is it that you were going for exactly? Cuz remove the flaws I mentioned, and you're left with a Render on an Image. Which isn't all that nice is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted May 17, 2010 Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 lol, the truth is behind the light... YOU HAVE MAJOR LIGHTING ISSUES. Choose 1 source and burn all the unneeded bright spots. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted May 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 we thanks everyone i got that lighting needs workand for icy you just went off on a tangent, im not trying to fool anyone, sorry that i am just begging to work on gfx and trying things out to see how they look, and some of those mess ups arnt mess ups, because you burned my whole image, you see all the imperfections amplifiedso sorry that i made mistakesand ill try to fix the light......until i do please no comments on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted May 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 version 2 is up.... i did lighting effect, and used sponge, burn, and dodge tool xD i think i funked up the lighting even more though and i made the focal point pop out a little more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfman505 Posted May 17, 2010 Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 It looks good to me 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted May 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 lol thanks wolfmannow that someone likes it..... i need to know what people hate about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted May 17, 2010 Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 AMAZING. I like the second better. More fog is good xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted May 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 what add fog or its good because there is more o.oand thanks =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted May 17, 2010 Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 The c4ds that he was trying to hide, were really obvious from the start. 2nd version still has problems, because your still covering up your mistakes instead of editing them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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