jhcman21 Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 [/i]It has been 3 months after the 2nd season of yugioh gx, somewhere in california. A young man named Adam vespar who has recently graduated from duel academy, who was in the top of his class, just recently quit the pro league. The reason, no one knows. It has been 2 years ever since he quit the pro league, but his pro dueling days might have ended but his tournament days are about to begin. CHAPTER 1- THE DYNON TOURNAMENT It was summer in california, it seemed like a normal day for Adam and then his phone rang.Adam: this adam hereMysterios voice: excuse me sir, but we have heard you were a pretty good duelist and we would like you to enter a tournament.Adam: I keep telling you people, my pro league days are over, what dont you getMysterious voice: We are willing to pay youAdam: How muchMysterious voice: Enough to get you through your debtAdam: How do you know about thatMysterious Voice: I know alot of things, so are you inAdam: Fine, when does this tournament startMysterious Voice: Go to the abanoned airport, tommorow morningAdam: Should i look for someoneMysterious voice: Yes, his name will be JackAdam: okThe next morning at the abanoned airport.Adam: Hello is anyone hereJack: Yes i am the hereAdam : Ok, so where is the planeJack: Oh, no no no noAdam: What are you talking aboutJack: See master sent me to test you, he want me to duel youAdam: Well okJack: If you somehow manage to beat me in a duel, i will take you to the tournamentAdam: and if i loseJack: Then master gets your soulAdam: What... you know what i do not have time for your games, so how bout we duel alreadyJack and Adam: DUELJack/ 4000Adam/4000Jack: I will go first, draw, ha ha, i already have a strategy to destroy you and your soul, i summon my Luster Dragon (ATK/1900 DEF/1600), and then i place one card face down, your demise is so close.Adam:Oh yeah, i draw and summon my Armed dragon LV 3(ATK/1200 DEF/900), and then i play one card face down and i end my turn.Jack: I draw, and activate my pot of greed spell card and now i am allowed to draw 2 extra cards. Now watch as i take down your life points, but first i activate my Mystical Space Typhoon, to destroy your face down card.Adam: No, he destroyed my draining shieldJack: Now I summon my Snipe Hunter (ATK/1500 DEF/600), by discarding 1 card from my hand, i roll a dice, if the result is something other than a 1 or 6 say goodbye to the card i select. I select your Armed Dragon LV 3, I will discard my card to the graveyard, Now go dice roll, ah ha, it is a 2. Now Luster Dragon and my Snipe Hunter attack his life points directly. (Adam/4000-1900=2100)(Adam/1900-1500=400) Adam/400Jack/4000 Jack: Now in just one more turn i will take your soul for my master.Adam: Yeah, but now it is my turn, draw, Oh yeah, now i got ya, watch and learn, I play 2 face down cards and activate Emergency Provisions, now by sacrifising my 2 face down cards i gain 2000 life points. Adam/2400Jack/4000 Adam: Now I summon on out my X-head cannon(ATK/1800 DEF/1500) and throw down a face down card and i end my turn.Jack: Hmp, your determination amuses me, but it is to bad, this duel has to end, i discard my Luster Dragon 2 to the graveyard, and now go dice roll, what a 6, no, but i still activate my call of the haunted, this allows me to revive my Luster Dragon 2(ATK/2400 DEF/1900). Now it is over, Luster Dragon 2 attck and end this duel.Adam:Not so fast, i activate a trap card known as Negate attack, Now all your attacks are negated for the rest of this turn.Jack: Oh well, i end my turn.Adam: Draw, cool, i activate the equip spell Megamorph, doubling my monsters ATK points,so long as you have more life points than me, so now my X-Head cannon has 3600 ATK, now X-Head cannon attack his Luster Dragon 2.Jack:AhhhhhhJack(4000-1200=2800) Adam/2400Jack/2800 Jack: Alright my turn, draw, well I switch my Luster Dragon into defence mode(DEF/1600) along with my Snipe Hunter(DEF/600), and i will set a monster in face down defense position and end my turn.Adam: Draw, I play one card face down and end my turn.Jack: Is that all you got, ha i draw, and now, i tribute my 3 monsters to summon my Gilford The Lightning(ATK/2800 DEF/1400), when my monster is summoned with 3 tributes he destroys all monsters on your side of the field, so know attack his life points directly, so i can take his soul,Adam: I will activate a trap card mirror force, so now your monster is destroyed.Jack: What, no, this cant beAdam: Now it is my turn, draw, sweet i play, premature burial, and i pay 800 life points to return, my X-Head Cannon into play and now i play the equip spell, Axe Of Despair, now my Cannon has 2800 ATK, now attack his life points directly and end this duel.Jack:noooo Jack/0Adam/1600 Adam:Well thats game, you did a good job, but not good enough to beat meJack:Well done, now to get you to the tournament.A knock out gas suddenly appears out of no where 13 HOURS LATER Adam wakes up in a volcanoe with 15 other people. Master:Welcome all, to the Dynon Volcanoe Chapter 2 preview: The next episode The tournament begins and the first duel begins of the tournament Please comment on what i could do better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 This isn't too bad. There seems to be a good plot. But how come Adam didn't attack Jack when he had a chance too? Like he could have destroyed Jack's Snipe Hunter with X-Head Cannon. Also, if they wanted him to enter the tournament, why would they force him to duel in order to enter if he was already invited? 7.5/10, but write more please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jhcman21 Posted December 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 yeah, i kinda screwed up a little, but jack has a important role, and jack wanted to duel adam for many reasons you will find out later.Thanks for reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zane trusedale Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jhcman21 Posted December 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 thanks man, chapter 2 will be up in an hour or so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zane trusedale Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 sweet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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