Death Note Structure Deck

[BDB vi Britannia]

These are some cards I put together with a specific theme for Death Note as a kind of Structure Deck. Take a look at it and tell me what you think.

 

[spoiler=Monsters]

Flip: Increase the original ATK of 1 monster on the field by 600.

 

When this card attacks a face-down defense position monster, destroy the monster with this cards effect without flipping it face-up.

 

If this card were to be removed from the field by a card effect, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate the effect of the card and destroy it.

 

A former first rate FBI agent. She has solved the case of the BB Serial Murders and has worked closely with L.

 

Once per turn, if this card were to be destroyed by a card effect, it is not. Increase the ATK and DEF of this monster by 300 for every "L's Apprentice" monster on your side of the field excluding this card.

 

Up to twice per turn, if this card were to be destroyed by battle, it is not. Decrease the ATK and DEF of this monster by 400 for every "L's Apprentice" monster on your side of the field excluding this card.

 

This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards.

 

If one of your monsters were to be destroyed, you can tribute this face-up card instead.

 

If control of this face-up card is switched to your opponent, destroy this card.

 

If you control a monster other than this card, this card cannot be selected as an attack target.

 

You can Special Summon this card from your hand by tributing 2 face-up "L's Apprentice" monsters from your side of the field. The original DEF of this card is equal to the combined DEF of the monsters used to Tribute Summon this card. If this face-up monster is removed from the field, you can Special Summon 1 "L's Apprentice - Nate River" and 1 "L's Apprentice - Miheal Kheel" from your hand or deck.

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. During the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, return it to its owner's hand. When this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, destroy all face-down cards on the field.

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Rise of a New World." Control of this face-up card cannot switch. Once per turn, if this card were to be destroyed it is not.

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Rise of a New World." Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points for every monster in the opponents graveyard. Once per turn if this card were to be destroyed, it is not.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Another Note: BB Serial Murder Case". Once per turn, this card can negate 1 Magic, 1 Trap, and 1 Monster Card effect and destroy it. Every time this monster attacks, its original ATK is increased by 4000 points. After this monster has attacked 3 times, remove it from play. This card can only be used once.

 

 

[spoiler=Spells]

On the turn 5 monsters on your side of the field were destroyed, you can destroy all cards on your side of the field to Special Summon 1 "Beyond Birthday" from your deck.

 

Once per turn, if the monster equipped with this card is destroyed by a card effect, it is not destroyed (If the equipped monster were to be destroyed, destroy this card instead).

 

Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can select 1 face-up monster on the opponents side of the field and destroy it. If this effect is chained, the selected monster is not destroyed and you take damage equal to the selected monsters DEF.

 

This card is be used to Ritual Summon "Kira - God of the New World" or "Misa Amane - Mother of the New World". You must also offer Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal the Level of the Ritual Monster you are attempting to Ritual Summon.

 

Select 1 face-up monster on your side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, once per turn during your Main Phase 2 you can Special Summon a monster to your side of the field from your hand with less stars than the selected monster. If this card is face-up on the field when the selected monster is removed from the field, destroy all monsters Special Summoned by this card effect.

 

You can only activate this card if there is a monster on your side of the field. Increase your Life Points by 1200.

 

This card can only be equipped to a monster on your side of the field. Select either a monster name, Attribute, or Type. The monster equipped with this card has its name/Type/Attribute switched with the designated one.

 

This card can only be equipped to a monster on your opponents side of the field. Select either a monster name, Attribute, or Type. The monster equipped with this card has its name/Type/Attribute switched with the designated one.

 

If your monster battles a monster who's attack is equal to or less than your battling monster, double the ATK of your monster until the end of Damage Step.

 

When a LV7 or higher monster on your side of the field is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, Special Summon up to 2 LV4 or lower monsters from your deck.

 

Select 1 monster that was Special Summoned to your side of the field this turn. This turn, the selected monster can make 1 extra attack. During the End Phase, return the selected monster to your deck and shuffle.

 

Special Summoned monsters cannot be removed from the field.

 

 

[spoiler=Traps]

Activate after an opponent attacks a monster on your side of the field and your monster is not destroyed as a result of battle. Destroy the attacking monster.

 

Activate when the opponent negates a card effect and destroys it. The opponent must randomly discard 1 card from their hand. If they cannot, add the destroyed card to your deck and draw 1 card.

 

Select 1 monster from your Graveyard and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. The monsters effect is changed to: "Once per turn, if this monster were to be destroyed, it is not destroyed." When this card is removed from the field, destroy the monster. When the monster is removed from the field, destroy this card.

 

[BDB vi Britannia]

If anyone could reply that would be nice =/

i made these legitimate enough to use in a real duel

[zancrow the flame god]

not bad. 8.5/10

[Noahmeta]

Very interesting ^^

 

Originality: 8 (i'm pretty sure someone came up with a death note archetype already, but whatevs)

Playability: 9 (could fix some OCG, but other than that it's good)

Images: 7 (some are perfect, others are kinda squished and stuff, try to crop them or something)

 

total: 24/30

= 8/10

 

^_^ if the playability and images are fixed then 10/10! :D

[BDB vi Britannia]

Very interesting ^^

 

Originality: 8 (i'm pretty sure someone came up with a death note archetype already' date=' but whatevs)

Playability: 9 (could fix some OCG, but other than that it's good)

Images: 7 (some are perfect, others are kinda squished and stuff, try to crop them or something)

 

total: 24/30

= 8/10

 

^_^ if the playability and images are fixed then 10/10! :D

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Thnx alot for the reviews <=D

[Home Slice]

It is very rare to see Death note cards so props to you on that

It really seemed good until I saw the vanilla...

Don't make vanillas,not worth making

Picutures seem fairly decent

Its not like I have a thing against short effects,even I use them on cards,just don't overflow most of your cards with short effects IMO it would be more creative to put a little more then balance of cards with longer effects XD

"Death"'s pic needs a Background

Solid rating of 7/10 for you(Thats really good coming from me)

[BDB vi Britannia]

It is very rare to see Death note cards so props to you on that

It really seemed good until I saw the vanilla...

Don't make vanillas' date='not worth making

Picutures seem fairly decent

Its not like I have a thing against short effects,even I use them on cards,just don't overflow most of your cards with short effects IMO it would be more creative to put a little more then balance of cards with longer effects XD

"Death"'s pic needs a Background

Solid rating of 7/10 for you(Thats really good coming from me)

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Thnx for the advice on vanillas. Ive stopped making those. Anyone else want to comment? Death Note fans maybe?