Yatsu Posted May 18, 2010 Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 [align=center]Divinity awaits the final beast! Synchro Summon! Burn with Darkness Advanced Red Eyed Dragon1 "Red Eyes" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)While this card is face-up on the field all face-up monster your opponent controls cannot change Battle Position. Once per turn, you can discard your entire hand to draw the same amount of cards from your Deck. This card cannot declare an attack the turn you activate this effect. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. You can discard your whole hand to Special Summoned this card from your Graveyard. You can remove from play 2 "Red Eyes Black Chick" from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Red Eyes Black Dragon" from your Deck. You can only activate this effect once per duel. "Red-Eyes Black Dragon" + "Red-Eyes Black Dragon" + "Red-Eyes Black Dragon"This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play the above Fusion Material Monsters. (You do not use Polymerization) Once per turn, you can return 2 cards from your hand to your Deck to add 1 "Red Eyes" monster from your Deck to your hand. You can pay 300 Life Points to Normal Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster an extra time per turn. You can Pay 1000 Life Points to have this card attack once again in a row, once per Battle Phase. 1 "Red Eyes" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)When this card is Synchro Summoned, decrease the ATK of all face-up Attack Position monsters by 500, except this card. When this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Red Eyes" monster from your Graveyard, except "Red Eyes Black Chick". This card inflicts piercing damage. When this card is Summoned all face-up "Red Eyes" monsters are treated as non-Tuner monsters. Once per turn, by removing from play 1 "Red Eyes" monster in your hand you can Special Summon 1 "Red Eyes" monster from your Graveyard. More to come [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ateshyami Posted May 18, 2010 Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 Hmm... The wording and grammar is slightly off, but apart from that, great card. It's well-balanced (drawbacks to counter effects) and the image is made of win. In fact, apart from a few of the smaller details (wording, minor grammatical errors, set name, year, and creator, which are unimportant in any case) this would easily pass for a real card. I wouldn't be surprised to see something exactly like it in Shonen Jump. Overall, excellent job. 9/10 (minus one for grammar and wording, but that's just because I'm a geek) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted May 18, 2010 Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 [align=center]1 Tuner + "Red Eyes Black Dragon" While this card is face-up on the field all face-up monster your opponent controls cannot change Battle Position. Once per turn' date=' you can discard your entire hand to draw the same amount of cards from your Deck. This card cannot declare an attack the turn you activate this effect. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. More to come[/align'] [spoiler=Infernal Dragon says hi] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yatsu Posted May 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 0.0 I just typed in Red Eyes Dragon and found this pic on google. )= I'll try and find a new pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ateshyami Posted May 18, 2010 Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 [align=center]1 Tuner + "Red Eyes Black Dragon" While this card is face-up on the field all face-up monster your opponent controls cannot change Battle Position. Once per turn' date=' you can discard your entire hand to draw the same amount of cards from your Deck. This card cannot declare an attack the turn you activate this effect. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. More to come[/align'] [spoiler=Infernal Dragon says hi] Wow. No wonder it looked so much like a real card o.OStill, it's pretty awesome. I wish they'd release something like this in Shonen Jump :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted May 18, 2010 Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 Take another pic!!! The effect is quite balanced, but do not write "Piercing Damage" ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted May 18, 2010 Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 Take another pic!!! The effect is quite balanced' date=' but do not write "Piercing Damage" ![/quote'] I do believe piercing damage is correct OCG so don't tell someone because you believe it is incorrect. Trust me it can be written both ways so don't jump to one side. Umm yeah you do need another pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yatsu Posted May 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2010 Updated all cards and found new pic for Advanced Red Eyed Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted May 19, 2010 Report Share Posted May 19, 2010 Advanced Red-Eyed now has an epic pic. The concept of a Red-Eyes Ultimate is getting pretty old, but oh well. You did good on it anyway. Just so you know, Red-Eyes is hyphenated. Red-Eyes Black Magician looks a bit OPed with 1300 ATK as a Level 2. Maybe lower the ATK a bit?Good cards for a new member. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A King by Rights Posted May 19, 2010 Report Share Posted May 19, 2010 Wit Red-Eyes Ultimate how wud you be able to summon a Red-Eyes from your Deck when ur only allowed 3 copies of a card and Ultimate removed three from play? Also "You can pay 300 Life Points to Normal Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster an extra time per turn." Should go more like: Pay 300 Life Points, You are allowed an extra normal summon of a level 3 or lower monster once per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yatsu Posted May 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Wit Red-Eyes Ultimate how wud you be able to summon a Red-Eyes from your Deck when ur only allowed 3 copies of a card and Ultimate removed three from play? Also "You can pay 300 Life Points to Normal Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster an extra time per turn." Should go more like: Pay 300 Life Points' date=' You are allowed an extra normal summon of a level 3 or lower monster once per turn.[/quote'] 1)There are cards that allow you to return cards back to your deck. 2)No, your attempt at an OCG fix would be incorrect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smellslikefood Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 wow props on the pictures :0that red eyes master thing is way op thoughyou can easily loop with two red eyes masters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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