DSS Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 My first ritual Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Overused picture for the monster, and not so good picture for the Spell. Horrible OCG and Grammar errors on your monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted December 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 what does OCG stand for anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Official Card Grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 On your first card terrible OCG and grammar with a overused picand your 2nd isnt much better but you have good ideas.Sorry, try again. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 5/10 some errors and OCG errors dragon pic is alright don't like pyramid pic though that much just simple:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 the spell card looks too realistic and the pic for the dragon is overused Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kobekid Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 i agree, u have terrible ocg grammar 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryuzei Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Read the stickies for help ^^;Here's something that you need to do to balance that card. . 1. Decrease the ATK power of that card, and keep that condition.2. Keep the ATK, but increase the condition to use that effect. For example you need to discard one card to destroy one card or stuff like that :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 The grammar isn't too good and the pics are overused. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 6/10when writing names in a card effect they must be in "quotation marks"with multiple other errorsno point in saying any more =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 I agree with Bloodrun and Glasstin10.But nice card. so I will give it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Good pic, a little overpowered. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dragon Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 OCG needs some remaking ... overpowered..7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 7/10...good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted January 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 I've fixed the OCG but i can't find a good pic for my ritual spell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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