2 Kakuzu cards

[necroplayer386]

hey i just created 2 kakuzu cards and was wondering what people thought about them.

please rate out of 10 for each card. please give reason for rating (good or bad). and btw im new at this xD

[necroplayer386]

Kakuzu just is'nt Kakuzu W/O Hidan xD

[NeosWiseman]

First, I need to tell you that fake Types are not appreciated (not really, but many people don't like seeing them). I suggest Zombie-Type

OCG (Original Card Grammar) correction:

Kakuzu: When this card is Normal Summoned, select 1 monster from your opponent's Graveyard and Special Summon it to your side of the field in face-up Attack/Defense Position. (I suggest you make it Defense Position, but really you should choose)

Hidden Hearts (There is no such thing as a Quick-Play Trap, make it Normal): When a "Kakuzu" you control is selected as an attack target, Special Summon a "Heart Token" (Zombie-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in face-up Defense Position to each of your empty Monster Card Zones. The target of the attack is then changed to 1 "Heart Token". As long as there is a "Heart Token" on your field, "Kakuzu" you control cannot be selected as an attack target or the target of your opponent card effects.

Hidan: This card cannot be destroyed in battle. Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points for each Zombie-Type monster you control.

The Zombie Twins: As long as both "Hidan" and "Kakuzu" are face-up on your field they can attack your opponent directly. During each of your Standby Phases you must pay 500 Life Points. If you cannot, destroy this card.

 

Now for the cards themselves.

You can decrease Hidan's Level to 3.

The picture of the last card can be changed with a better one and I suggest changing part of the name as well. Not Twins but Brothers. (Their nickname: Zombie Brothers)

The other pics are awesome.

 

Overall, good cards, but since they are your first I recommend reading the OCG Thread here.

 

I'll be keeping an eye on your works. Good luck! ^_^

[necroplayer386]

First' date=' I need to tell you that fake Types are not appreciated (not really, but many people don't like seeing them). I suggest Zombie-Type

OCG [i'](Original Card Grammar)[/i] correction:

Kakuzu: When this card is Normal Summoned, select 1 monster from your opponent's Graveyard and Special Summon it to your side of the field in face-up Attack/Defense Position. (I suggest you make it Defense Position, but really you should choose)

Hidden Hearts (There is no such thing as a Quick-Play Trap, make it Normal): When a "Kakuzu" you control is selected as an attack target, Special Summon a "Heart Token" (Zombie-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in face-up Defense Position to each of your empty Monster Card Zones. The target of the attack is then changed to 1 "Heart Token". As long as there is a "Heart Token" on your field, "Kakuzu" you control cannot be selected as an attack target or the target of your opponent card effects.

Hidan: This card cannot be destroyed in battle. Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points for each Zombie-Type monster you control.

The Zombie Twins: As long as both "Hidan" and "Kakuzu" are face-up on your field they can attack your opponent directly. During each of your Standby Phases you must pay 500 Life Points. If you cannot, destroy this card.

 

Now for the cards themselves.

You can decrease Hidan's Level to 3.

The picture of the last card can be changed with a better one and I suggest changing part of the name as well. Not Twins but Brothers. (Their nickname: Zombie Brothers)

The other pics are awesome.

 

Overall, good cards, but since they are your first I recommend reading the OCG Thread here.

 

I'll be keeping an eye on your works. Good luck! ^_^

 

Thanks :D and i believe i fixed the problems, as for the pic ill look for one later, i want to start working on more orginal cards next.

[Guest Neo Fusion]

not bad cards, some minor errors

tho I have to say, u need to add any new cards u make to the first post, not as a reply like with hidan

just go to edit in the bottom right corner of ur first post, click quick edit, then paste the card code there