necroplayer386 Posted May 18, 2010 Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 my other cards have been well.... test's. so i put together what i learnd and came up with thisplease rate :D Lore: This card can only be Special summoned by Tributing 3 Dragon-type monsters. Increase the ATK points of this card by 500 for every face-up Dragon-Type monster on the Field. When this card is destroyed, increace the ATK points of every face-up Dragon-Type monster on the Field by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A King by Rights Posted May 18, 2010 Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 special summoned= Special Summonedfield=FieldI don't see any other OCG mistakes Not bad for a New Member (not gonna use the word NOOB) (that word is so negative and discouraging)Welcome to YCM!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
necroplayer386 Posted May 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 special summoned= Special Summonedfield=FieldI don't see any other OCG mistakes Not bad for a New Member (not gonna use the word NOOB) (that word is so negative and discouraging)Welcome to YCM!!! ty very much :D and it's ok with me to say noob because i am one xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted May 18, 2010 Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 im very impressed. awsome first post. you will be a highly respected member of the ycm community if you keep up work like this. (be wary tho, there is alot of negetivity on this board. try to view it as constructive criticism instead :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
necroplayer386 Posted May 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 im very impressed. awsome first post. you will be a highly respected member of the ycm community if you keep up work like this. (be wary tho' date=' there is alot of negetivity on this board. try to view it as constructive criticism instead :D[/quote'] lol ok i will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sUUpErC00W Posted May 18, 2010 Report Share Posted May 18, 2010 Well, it's a good card, with a nice pic and pretty good OCG. But... -special summoned should be Special Summoned-I think field should just be field, not Field like others say. I'm saying this so that you can remember and learn from it, certainly not to make you feel bad. (It's constructive criticism) I'm also new at Yu-Gi-Oh card maker but this thread really helped me: http://www.yugiohforums.com/showthread.php?t=35108It's a really handy thread which explains everything about OCG. I mention this about OCG, but OCG is not required, ofcourse, since some people think it limits your creativity. About the effect: It's a pretty good effect, ATK increase is always handy. It's pretty balanced, not only in level but also because Dragon-Types are not very common, so the effect is not too strong. My rating would be 9, where 10 would be a card with perfect OCG, balance and a pretty pic. The reason it doesn't get a 10 is because of the minor OCG mistakes, but this is really only minor. You'll get better after time and also after finding out the correct OCG forms. It's a pretty good card :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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