Lucas Maximus Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Sorry if my OCG/grammar isnt perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Picture needs resizing, some Grammar errors, ok effect tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 6/10 good card some OCG and errors though:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryuzei Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Good pics, good effects :3 I wouldn't comment about Grammar because the prson above me had already commented that ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted December 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Thanks for your comments, i really know i need to improve on my OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryuzei Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Now you only need to create an Equip Spell card that when it's negated, it could be returned to your hand in your next turn :3 And this card would be perfect XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 well its a nice card other than the grammar, but you can explain that 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kobekid Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 nice card bad grammar 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 The grammar could improve, and the pic is a little stretched...but not too bad! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 6/10capitalization errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Lower level to 3 and ATK to 1000, no " around equip spell card and change to Equip Spell Card. Good pic, though used. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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