My new Dragonian set ... first 3 cards ... Maadd1 ... need quick comments plz

[Ghoulish]

This set is called the Dragonian set. Dragonian = Dragon + Cicvilian(warrior). the main point of the deck is field swarm and more improtantlty adding from the deck or graveyard to your hand "dragonian" monsters.(i know there are no pics and these probs belong in the written cardsection, buttt i need some quik opinions and ur morelikely to get a reply if u dont post in the thread then if you do, just need a couple of quik comments on opinions and where to improve.)

 

 

This card can be Special Summoned from your hand when a "Dragonian" monster you control is destroyed by battle. This card inflicts peircing damage. Whenever this card inflicts peircing damage to your opponent, you can pay the same Life Points as your opponent did, to Special Summon from your Deck 1 Level 3 or Lower Dragon-Type "Dragonian" monster. The Summoned monster cannot attack this turn.

 

 

While you control 1 "Dragonian" monster this card can be Special Summoned from your hand. While you control at least 1 other "Dragonian" monster this card cannot be selected as the target of an attack or effect. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard you can add 1 level 3 or lower "Dragonian" monster to your hand from your Deck. If this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a "Dragonian" monster, Special Summon 1 Level 4 "Dragonian" monster from your Graveyard.

 

 

When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle you can return 1 "Dragonian" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card successfully destroys a monster your opponent controls, add 1 Dagonian Counter to this card. You can remove 3 Dragonian counters from this card to add 1 Level 4 or Lower "Dragonian" monster from your Deck to your hand.

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Oh and BTW if anyone has a bter way to set out the na,me for eg: Dragonian, blah blah or Dragonian of Peircing, or some better way to set i9t out plzzz let me know

[Ghoulish]

omg no comments at all?

[Ghoulish]

why is thi post repoted for? If u want me to add pics just say so??? And ill add them, ffs all i wanted was some quik comment gratz to the gimp that eported this