See new Cards i made

[Rosuke]

Hello Please See and Rate/Comment on my new cards

 

Lore : You can Pay 3000 Life Points to Pick this card from your Deck and 1 ``Polimerysation`` and Add The 2 cards to your Hand . When this card Is Returned to your Hand by a monster Card Effect increase your life points by 400 .

 

 

Lore : ``Red Giant Parrot`` + 1 Lvl 4 Warrior Monster.

This Monster can attack direct . when this card is Destroyed you can return from your Graveyard 1 ``Red Giant Parrot`` and 1 Warrior monster , This Effetc can't be Negated .

 

 

Thanks for See ^^

[Rosuke]

Comment? Rate ?? T.T

[Rosuke]

What Happenss Here ? why us not comment or rate my cards?

[yigha]

there not worth it.

you didn't take your time to think true your effects. there ful of mistakes, wrong capitals, uncertainties,...

for example,

You can Pay 3000 Life Points to Pick this card from your Deck and 1 ``Polimerysation`` and Add The 2 cards to your Hand . When this card Is Returned to your Hand by a monster Card Effect increase your life points by 400 .

 

--> You can Pay 1000 Life Points to pick another "Red Giant Parrot" from your Deck and 1 "Polimerysation" and add the 2 cards to your Hand. When this card Is returned to your Hand by a monster card effect increase your life points by 1000 .

 

 

This Monster can attack direct . when this card is Destroyed you can return from your Graveyard 1 ``Red Giant Parrot`` and 1 Warrior monster , This Effetc can't be Negated .

 

---> This monster can attack your opponents Life Points direct. When this card is destroyed you can return from your Graveyard 1 "Red Giant Parrot" and 1 Warrior-Type monster to your Hand/Deck. This effect cannot be negated .

 

both monster cards are not strong enough for there ATK and effect you gave.

[matthew251]

Sorry dude but these kinda suck pics are ok but ocg is a crying shame