New Doom Mage Cards

[matthew251]

YO i made these in my free time plz point out any eroors thanks

lore

This card cannot be normal summoned or set this card can only be special sumoned with the effect of Doom mage Lv4. Once per turn on you or your opponants standby phase you may discard 2 cards to remove from play one card on the field. For each card removed from play while this card is face up on the field increase the ATK of any card of your choise excludeing this card by 300 points

lore

When this card destroys 3 monsters by battle you may special summon one Doom Mage Lv 10 from your hand or deck.

[GeroKeymaster]

Fixed to the best of my knowledge: LV10--"This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special sumoned by the effect of "Doom Mage LV4". During either player's Standby Phase you can discard 2 cards from your hand to remove from play one card on the field. For each card removed from play by this effect, increase the ATK of one other monster on the field by 300."

 

LV4--"After this card has destroyed at least 3 monsters by Battle, by sending it to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Doom Mage LV10" from your hand or Deck."

 

Not too bad on the OCG, just minor fixes. It is weird though, to see a LV monster go up 6 levels all at once. For the LV10, I would make the remove from play part of the effect only work during your turn, or it might be considered over-powered. Altogether, I'd give the set an 8/10.