sUUpErC00W Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 Hey, it's my second post, this time with cards:lol: These are my best cards (until now), because my previous cards were more like practice cards. These are my serious cards, and they're serious since i finally found the OCG and Grammar Thread, so i (think) i've already corrected some of the OCG errors. I'm very curious for your opinions. I think you can read the card effects :p Yes, they're all level 5 and above, because level 4 or lower cards are pretty boring to make unless they have a really good effect. So, give them a rating and please tell me about OCG errors so i can correct them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sUUpErC00W Posted May 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Helooooo anyone here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huh? Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Post the lores and I will fix OCG. They're average, but not awesome. 5/10, once OCG is fixed, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 I'm here. C Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matthew251 Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 cool for 1st cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sUUpErC00W Posted May 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2010 I'm here. C Tell me what u think :Dcool for 1st cards Thnx :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted May 24, 2010 Report Share Posted May 24, 2010 I'm here. C Tell me what u think :D I did, C is a grade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted May 24, 2010 Report Share Posted May 24, 2010 I'm here. C Tell me what u think :D I did, C is a grade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeik Posted May 24, 2010 Report Share Posted May 24, 2010 I'm no master of OCG but I'll have a crack at this BlackKnight - "Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. Pay 500 Life Points to return all of your monsters that were destroyed this turn to your hand." bit overpowered since it can't be attacked at all maybe make it like Command Knight where you can't attack it if you control other monsters Celestial Slehen - "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can Special Summon this card from your hand by discarding 4 other monster cards from your Hand. This card loses 200 ATK for every DARK monster on the field." Darkness Takeru - "This card can be Special Summoned from your hand, when your opponent destroys 1 or more of your monsters. When this card destroys a monster by battle, your opponent randomly discards 1 card from there hand." seems quite overpowered since it can come out so quick Gaki The Fire Oni - "When this card is summoned deal 500 damage for every WATER monster on the field. When a WATER monster is Summoned, return it to its owners hand and draw 1 card." Kills WATER decks. Combine with DNA transplant to prevent your opponent from Summoning at all..... overall not bad 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I KOed God Posted May 24, 2010 Report Share Posted May 24, 2010 cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Cabbage Posted May 24, 2010 Report Share Posted May 24, 2010 the image on takeru is abit revealing.after some OCG fixes i'd say 7.6/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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