Dying Phantom Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 Hey guys this is my first card i hope you like it. Edited :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamsturinn Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 8/10 not op :) cool pcs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 I think the last effect makes it a bit OPed and you need some work on OCG, but thats not unusual for a newbie ;)8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Cabbage Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 OCG fixes: standby phase should be Standby Phase...your opponent Special Summons a monster from THERE Graveyard ^ THEIRlevel 3 should be Level 3 ...your opponent Special Summons a monster from THEIR GRAVEYARD the pack code should be(in your case) DYP-EN021 also the pic is abit revealing not bad for a first card, if you fix those things, great but for now 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dying Phantom Posted May 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 ok, ill do that, thanks for the rates :)Edited :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dying Phantom Posted May 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maz Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matthew251 Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 brilliant 4 first card 8/10 but as the others said ocg and pic needs work but not to shabby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 To be honest, this is better than some of the cards I make myself. Agree with the OCG corrections above, and I think it's well balanced; sacrifice 2 monsters, have the potential for it to go bad, but you get a free fairy monster every turn that's in the Graveyard. Love it! 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rifall Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 OCG fixes: standby phase should be Standby Phase...your opponent Special Summons a monster from THERE Graveyard ^ THEIRlevel 3 should be Level 3 ...your opponent Special Summons a monster from THEIR GRAVEYARD I'm sorry, but THEIR is the correct form of the word (possessive). You were telling him to use the locative form of the word. Go back to 3rd grade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gizmo00999 Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 It's actually They're.lol. Anyhow, i like the card, it's actually really balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dying Phantom Posted May 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Thanks for the rates, i actually edited it already maybe non of you saw it, but if there are any corrections that i missed please post them :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 I'm sorry, but THEIR is the correct form of the word (possessive). You were telling him to use the locative form of the word. Go back to 3rd grade. Thats what D-4 wanted to fix Phantom! Reading is helpful so go back to the Kindergarten! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huh? Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 8/10 purdy cool..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dying Phantom Posted May 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 @Krokosaurus: hey i already am! stop being so mean or else ill call my mommy! ;) @Huh?: Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 It's a MIRACLE! A first card that isn't a piece of s***!!!! 8/10, and I give you a rep for not being crappy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dying Phantom Posted May 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hass Mac Posted May 22, 2010 Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 It's a MIRACLE! God has blessed us with a new member thats good at card making! A first card that isn't a piece of s***!!!! 8/10' date=' and I give you a rep for not being crappy. [b']Oh yeah, i think Hass Mac also wants to give u a rep[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dying Phantom Posted May 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwilightSoul Posted May 22, 2010 Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 I like this card i belive it is balanced 5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matthew251 Posted May 22, 2010 Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 It's a MIRACLE! God has blessed us with a new member thats good at card making! A first card that isn't a piece of s***!!!! 8/10' date=' and I give you a rep for not being crappy. [b']Oh yeah, i think Hass Mac also wants to give u a rep so. I think matthew251 wants to too.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dying Phantom Posted May 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 hehe, thanks matthew Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dying Phantom Posted May 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adogadog8 Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 may=can9.4/10 Nice for first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dying Phantom Posted May 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2010 Thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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