Fanged Dragon Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 My new archtype the Crusade Champions. Here's some I've created so far and a few supporting Spell & Trap cards. Rate out of 10 Please =) Crusade Champion - Ravage's effect: "Crusade Champion - Dread" + 1 or more non-Tuner "Crusade Champion" monsters.During your Main Phase, you can activate one of the following effects.- By paying 1000 of your Life Points, you can destroy all of your opponents monsters on the field. - Select 2 monster cards in your hand and remove them from play. This card gains ATK equal to the combined ATK of the 2 monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Huh? Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Galio's effect should say "Once per turn, by tributing..." Dread's effect, you can probably cut the monster in "Synchro Material Monster..." But that's just what I think, and I'm probably wrong. Gore's effect, "Defence" is Defense. Add "you control" after "...'Crusade Champion' monster you control" Savior is slightly overpowered, maybe make his second effect, "destroy all Spell and Trap cards on your side of the field?" That would make it more balanced. Ravage is also slightly overpowered. 1000 life points to destroy all monsters is too much. I don't know what you should change, but I'd change it. For Final Choice, Trap Cards are already Quick-Play, so you don't need that sign. Change the first part of the effect to, "Activate only when your opponent attacks a face-up attack position "Crusade Champion that you control." Other than that, it's perfect. Just change the number "1" in tAC effect to "a". Other than that, it's perfect. I love the cards, they're mostly balanced and very playable. If I were you, I'd make more level 4 and unders, right now you only have 2. They're great, especially for a onestar. +repped. P.S. BTW, my nickname is no one.No-one interested in my cards? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanged Dragon Posted May 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Galio's effect should say "Once per turn' date=' by [b']tributing[/b]..." Dread's effect, you can probably cut the monster in "Synchro Material Monster..." But that's just what I think, and I'm probably wrong. Gore's effect, "Defence" is Defense. Add "you control" after "...'Crusade Champion' monster you control" Savior is slightly overpowered, maybe make his second effect, "destroy all Spell and Trap cards on your side of the field?" That would make it more balanced. Ravage is also slightly overpowered. 1000 life points to destroy all monsters is too much. I don't know what you should change, but I'd change it. For Final Choice, Trap Cards are already Quick-Play, so you don't need that sign. Change the first part of the effect to, "Activate only when your opponent attacks a face-up attack position "Crusade Champion that you control." Other than that, it's perfect. Just change the number "1" in tAC effect to "a". Other than that, it's perfect. I love the cards, they're mostly balanced and very playable. If I were you, I'd make more level 4 and unders, right now you only have 2. They're great, especially for a onestar. +repped. P.S. BTW, my nickname is no one.No-one interested in my cards? :D Thanks a lot for the feedback, I'll edit them to what you have said =) Also, thanks for the rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huh? Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Welcome. Can't wait to see more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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