Hass Mac Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 Ive been wondering lately why there hasnt been that much Sea Serpent cards lately, so i decided to make one, and here it is..... Lore:When this card is Summoned, inflict damage to your opponents life points for each Sea Serpent-type on the field x300. Once per turn, by paying 500 life points, inflict damage to your opponent's life points by the level of one of your Sea Serpent-type monster on the field by x200. Then, that monster is sent to the Graveyard. Once per turn, during your standby phase, pay 200 life points (this is not optional). rate, hate, etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 every=eachopponents=opponent's I liked it though. Very realistic. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sbatman505 Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 nice 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 See a few ocg errors... If you want them fixed, PM me. The card is a little UPed. The burn effect is a little too much make it 100x the level instead of 200 and make the ATK 3200 or something but it's still UPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Great Wolf Sif Posted May 20, 2010 Report Share Posted May 20, 2010 Nice Love the card 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hass Mac Posted May 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Thanks for the ratings, i will fix the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 cap "Life Points" and "Level"."Sea Serpent-type on the field" add "monster" after type."field by x200." remove "by"."by the level" ==> "equal to the Level" one ==> 1.did any one know that this card can inflict 2100 damage ?!!I mean it is the half + 3-5 attacks because you can keep it for 5 or more turns with out any problem just 1000 life point...anyway it is not special...my rate..5.5/10...fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfman505 Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Love the sea 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hass Mac Posted May 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 wolfman, we all do ;) bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hass Mac Posted May 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxXxxtremnity Posted May 22, 2010 Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 cool effect, nice pic,, all in all agreat card, 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted May 22, 2010 Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 well I like the art and the effects are not bad, here an improvement for you: "When this card is tribute summoned, inflict damage to your opponents for each Sea Serpent-Type monster on the field x300. Once per turn, send one Sea Serpent-Type monster you control to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the level of the sent monster x 200. Once per turn, during your standby phase, pay 500 life points (this is not optional)." I would lower the monster's level by 1 and the ATK and DEF by 300 a good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hass Mac Posted May 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 thanks for the ratings @Scheath666: Thanks for the advice but AquaMaster told me that i should higher the ATK and you told me i should lower it...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted May 22, 2010 Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 well for lvl 9, usually for a little higher standard effects, your look more of lvl 8 standard. it would have to be slightly power up for lvl 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hass Mac Posted May 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 ok, so ill chenge the level to 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hass Mac Posted May 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingman-95 Posted May 22, 2010 Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 my newest card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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