Yaru Dark Devient Power Unleshed

[matthew251]

so here it is the subject kinda sucks it was to entice people in

plz comment

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[touzaikokon]

Well, I have to say...this is actually quite bad. First off, you're going to need proper OCG on the card text. It should read something like:

 

"1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 1500 Life Points to draw cards from the Deck until you draw a Trap Card."

 

Now, that being said, your effect is pretty insane, and not in the good way. You're probably going to want to lower the LP payment, as well as the number of cards you draw; drawing until you hit a trap can be abused in so many ways it's not even funny.

 

So I'd suggest fixing the grammar, and then the effect.

[Huh?]

drawing until you hit a trap can be abused in so many ways it's not even funny.

 

Exodia with no traps.

 

PWNed.

 

Also, I'd lower the attack. 3100 with that effect is way too much.

[賢狼ホロ]

However if you do not draw a Trap Card, the effect would probably fade and the cards returned to the deck or you deck out.

But still the effect could still be abused in certain decks, so you should probably add a negative effect like "Then discard cards until you only have 3 cards in your hand". Otherwise it has too much drawpower.

[Huh?]

You win as soon as you have all five pieces of Exodia. So if you draw all five, you automatically win, even if the cards were returned to the deck at the end of the effect. So, in other words:

drawing until you hit a trap can be abused in so many ways it's not even funny.

 

Exodia with no traps.

 

PWNed.

[賢狼ホロ]

Are you sure? For example Graceful Charity ruling;

"If you have three pieces of Exodia in your hand, "Graceful Charity", and no other cards, and then you activate "Graceful Charity" and draw the final 2 pieces of Exodia, you must discard 2 cards before a victory can be declared, but after you discard you will no longer have all 5 pieces of Exodia, and cannot declare a victory."

So apparently you cannot declare the Win while under the effect of a card, like this card. However, running a Deck low on Trap Cards would still make this card OP.

[Huh?]

I stand corrected. Thank you.

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

that total OP'ed if use in exodia deck, so if i were I'd decrease the ATK by 1000 and change the effect to "When this card is sent to the Graveyard by the result of a battle, pay 1000 life points, draw cards until you Draw spell or Trap cards." if you do that i'd give you 9/10

[matthew251]

Thanks il work on it and re post it