-Mert- Posted May 22, 2010 Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 [align=center]Pay 500 Life Points,Pikachu can attack tripletz only this turn!(This card can only be equiped with pikachu) When Bulbasaur attack to your opponent, your opponent must 300 life points! Pikachu can attack twice when this card normal summoned.If this card destroyed, you can draw "Poke Ball" in your graveyard or your deck. When pikachu summonned,special summoned or flip summoned, you can draw 2 card or your opponent must destroy 1 monster on his/her field!Pikachus gain 500 Atk points. You can fuse Pikachus in your graveyard or your field.Pay 500 Life Points, you can draw 2 card, if tfis card a pikachu,you can special summon on your field! If not, you can't fuse pikachus. If this card destroyed, you can special summon a pokemon! Tritube Pikachu and Bulbasaur for summon this card fusion deck to your field.This monster gain 200 ATK and decrase 200 DEF every turn.If DEF become 0,this card destroyed. This monster is summoned whit the situal spell card "Snowy Day".You must also offer monsters whose total Level stars equal 6 or more from hand as a tribute.This monster Lose 1000 DEF, and gain 1000 Atk every turn when face up Atk position. Flip:You gain 2500 Life points.But if this card destroy, you lose 1500 Life Points. Pikachu+PikachuIf this card destroy,you can special sumon 2 pikachu on the field. Pikachu+Pikachu+PikachuThis card can attack twice.And if this card destroy,you can special summon 3 Pikachu and draw 3 card. "Sorry for my bad English =P"[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
warhunter Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 this kinda belongs in the pop culture section. unoriginal, unfitting pics, OPd, and serious grammatical/spelling errors. I'll give you a 2 for effort though. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 Okay... Where should I start... Oh! I know! How about... The major OCG errors?I'm sorry for being cruel, but your cards are way to OP'ed (Over Powered). I mean, 6000 ATK for a monster that can attack twice per turn!?!?!? That's pretty outrageous. Besides, I know that you said that your english was poor, so I'm going to help your card descriptions. Angry Pikachu: "You must pay 500 Life Points to activate this card. You may only equip this card to a face-up "Pikachu" you control. The monster equipped with this card can attack 3 times during the Battle Phase. Destroy this card at your End Phase." Bulbasaur: "When this card declares an attack, deal 300 damage to your opponent." Pikachu: "This card can attack twice on the turn it was Normal Summoned. When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, you may add 1 "Poke Ball" from your graveyard or deck to your hand." Pikachu Fields: "When this card is activated, you may draw 2 cards and your opponent must destroy 1 monster on his/her side of the field. All face-up "Pikachu" on the field gain 500 ATK points." Pikachu Fusion: NOTE: This card honestly makes no sense. Because "Polymerization" does basically the same. But better. But I will try to make the card make at least some sense. By the way, I modified the card's effect just a little. "Pay 500 Life Points and draw 2 cards. If neither of the cards drawn have "Pikachu" in their card name, send both to the graveyard and destroy this card. If else, you may send Fusion material monsters to the graveyard to Fusion Summon a Fusion monster from your Extra Deck that has "Pikachu" as one of the Fusion material monsters listed." Poke Ball: NOTE: not everyone knows what a "Pokemon" is. So I have to make a bit of a modification. "When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, special summon 1 "Pikachu" from you hand or deck." Poke Power: ""Bulbasaur" + "Pikachu"During each of your Standby Phases, increase this card's ATK by 200 and decrease the DEF of this card by 200. If the DWF of this card becomes 0, destroy this card." Snowy Pikachu: "This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the Ritual Spell card "Snowy Day". During each of your Standby Phases if this card is in face-up attack position, increase this card's ATK by 1000 an decrease the DEF of this card by 1000." Squirtle: "FLIP: Gain 2500 Life Points. When this card is destroyed, you lose 1500 Life Points." Super Pikachu: ""Pikachu" + "Pikachu"When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, Special Summon up to 2 "Pikachu" from your graveyard." Ultimate Pikachu: ""Pikachu" + "Pikachu" + "Pikachu"When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, draw 3 cards and Special Summon up to 3 "Pikachu" from your graveyard." I am going to post again to fix up some other, more minor things, and try to make the cards a lot less OP'ed.Sorry... The Ultamite Pikachu should say:""Pikachu" + "Pikachu" + "Pikachu"This card can attack twice per turn. When this card is destroyed, draw 3 cards and Special Summon up to 3 "Pikachu" from your graveyard." Anyways, here is the minor error for your cards: - Only the "Pikachu Fusion" crd should be a Normal Spell, not a Counter Spell (I don't even think that Yu-Gi-Oh! even made a Counter Spell card). Now, to make the cards less OP'ed... I think I'll just tell you, card by card, if it need improving or if it's okay. Angry Pikachu: Good, but you should make it that "Pikachu" can attack twice, not 3 times. Bulbasaur: Whoah... Whoah, whoah, whoah. 2000 ATK and DEF for a level 4? Now that's rediculous. You should either make him a level 6 or lower his ATK and DEF to, say, 1600 ATK and 1500 DEF? Also, the Synchro monster "Poke Power" needs Bulbasaur to be a Tuner monster. Pikachu: Okay, but up the ATK to, say, 2100 and lower the DEF to around 1700. Pikachu Fields: No. Just, no. Way too OP'ed. You should change it so that you can only draw 1 card and your oppenent doesn't have to destroy a monster. Pikachu Fusion: On my edited version, it's just fine. Poke Ball: It's great, in my edited version. In fact, it's a little UP'ed (Under-Powered). Maybe you should raise the DEF to about 1500 and make it so that you can draw 1 card as well. Poke Power: It' ATK and DEF just need a little adjusting. Like, say, 1600 ATK and 2000 DEF? Also, to properly Synchro Summon him (cause you need the exact monster level) you need to make him a level 8 Synchro (if your change Bulasaur's ATK and DEF) or make it a level 9 or 10 Synchro (If your upping Bulbasaur's level to 5 or 6). Example: Poke Power (level 8 ) does not = Bulbasaur (level 4 Tuner) + Pikachu (level 5 monster), because 4 + 5 does not = 8. Snowy Pikachu: First off, you need to actually make the card "Snowy Day" for it with this description: "This card is used to Ritual Summon "Snowy Pikachu". You must also offer up a total level of stars of 6 or more from the field or your hand." (you don't need to write that on both cards, only on the Spell). Second, the card is VERY OP'ed. Not because of his effect, but because of his DEF. I mean, 6000 DEF? Either make the level 12 and change his DEF to 5000, or change his level to 9 and change his DEF to 4000. Squirtle: Okay, bur change the damage you take to 2000 and lower his def to 1800 or so. Super Pikachu: VERY OP'ed. No more said. Actually, a lot more said. Up his level to 8, change his DEF to 2500, and make him only Special Summon 1 "Pikachu". Ultimate Pikachu: Also very OP'ed. Change his ATK to 4000 and change his effect so that you won't draw more cards and you can only Special Aummon up to 2 "Pikachu"'s. Final Rating: 3/10 (Poor) Change them to something more to what I am saying and I'll rerate it to 9/10. Keep up the work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Mert- Posted May 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2010 sirtrystan 5: Yes I know, my English is poor, because I'm not English,and I don't know English well :P But I'll change something ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted May 27, 2010 Report Share Posted May 27, 2010 Okay then... anyways, good luck! P.S. you can just copy and paste what I wrote into the "description" section! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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