I turned 4 stars!

[Hass Mac]

I just turned 4 stars! Im now not a newbie anymore *patting myself on the back*

 

Lore:

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 Dragon-type monsters from your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all cards on the field except this card, and inflict 200 damage to your opponent times the number of cards been destroyed. This card cannot attack. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card cannot be tributes except its own effect. Discard 2 card, You take no battle damage from your opponent as long as this card is on the field. By tributing this card, inflict 500 damage times the level of this card, If your opponent lost the duel by this card's effect, you win the match."

 

Rate, hate, dance on, blow apart, etc

 

Just did MAJOR OGC fix(and edited effect)

[Hass Mac]

Bump, anyone?

[NeXodus]

Let me rate:

:3

[Hass Mac]

..... um..... i think thats good...... thanks......

anyone else?

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[Hass Mac]

Bump

someone PLEASE post

[Darth Naxetor]

Well, it is a good card except for the part of winning the duel. I just don't like those effects.

7/10

[matthew251]

Nice card but its a bit OPed and crazy with all the effects but its cool pic and name make up for it 8/10

[Hass Mac]

Thanks :) i like big effects, they make cards complicating

[PenguinZ]

6/10, the OCG could be better, and the effect is confusing at the end.

[Zektor]

7/10 OCG is ok but it says "destroy all cards on the field" when this card is summoned so the rest of its effect has no point

[Hass Mac]

just did major OGC fix. better?

[Zektor]

apart=except

while=as long

set=Set

now 8/10

[Anonymous]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot(<- suggest to make it like that to make it unable to be summoned from grave) be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 Dragon-Type monsters in your Graveyard and paying 1000 Life Points. When this card is summoned, destroy all cards on the field except this card. Both players take damage equal to the number of cards destroyed by this effect x200. This card cannot attack. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card cannot be tributed unless by it's own effect. You recive no battle damage from your opponent while this card is on the field. By tributing this card, you lose 10000 Life Points and you win the duel.

 

 

something like this ^_^

[Hass Mac]

read your own post, then you cannot Special Summon it AT ALL

nice try though :)

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

how about this? would this be beneficial and less OP'ed for you?

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 Dragon-type monsters from your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all cards on the field except this card, and inflict 200 damage to your opponent times the number of cards been destroyed. This card cannot attack. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card cannot be tributes except its own effect. Discard 2 card, You take no battle damage from your opponent as long as this card is on the field. By tributing this card, inflict 500 damage times the level of this card, If your opponent lost the duel by this card's effect, you win the match."

 

I put in the cost for not taking damage, and instead of win the duel, win the match, less op'ed and i fixed your error on OCG. so i guess it's 9/10 for you ^^

[Hass Mac]

thanks ^_^ ill edit it

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

well it like the sun shining now, i may need a glasses for this, cos it's blinding me. 8)

[black death1]

i think it is overcomplecated

[Hass Mac]

i REALLY like big and complicating cards, theyre fun to play with

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

Complication is my forte, hey Hass Mac, you should check my Dragonbond set, get my link from my sig.

[Psycholera]

I like it. It's got errors and it's overpowered, but I do like a long card effect and it's original. I like a long card effect so much that I have made a card for a contest which has 230 words in it - here.

 

It's a good contest. You should join. See if you can make a card with a longer effect!

[Card_Critic24]

Good for you!